Good idea, which fits the theme really nicely. However, there are quiet a few things which bothered me. First is the jumping, which feels rather floaty. You can also clip on walls (maybe that's intentional but doesn't feel like it. Some kind of animation to show you're attacking could be nice. Other than that good job.  

Even tough the game is definitely simplistic it was still an enjoyable experience. The only thing I didn't like that much is the rather "floaty" jump and that you can just jump onto a platform and keep left or right key pressed and stay there indefinitely. Besides that tough nice game and I definitely enjoyed the voice over.

Really appreciate the time to create three different characters each with different abilities and tell a story!

A few things that I think need to be considered next time if you'd like to step up your game to the next level.

1. It wasn't super challenging, it felt like more of an interactive story than a fully fledged game.

2. A lot of the audio clips sounded quite low quality which was a bit of a distraction.

3. The backgrounds were quite inconsistent, although I really liked the parallax effect you added. The first background was just plain blue though so felt inconsistent.

4. The story felt a little... all over the place. I was a little confused where and what was going on. I think that this could be clearer with a very clearly defined start, middle and end.

Overall

To say the very least, this game was super creative, a whole load of ideas all packed into one that I hope you learnt a lot from - that's what it's all about!

Some really great ideas here. I like the 3 different characters with 3 different abilities. I really like the idea of the voice over while you play. It was hard to hear sometimes though. I would add text with the audio to help with that. I was digging the music as well.

Nice! I like the voice acting lol. Weird but great game! I like the simplistic art also the music. Good job! I would also appreciate if you check out my game! Thanks :D

• The player floats in the air slightly: https://gyazo.com/ee5ceb3a64ade505698a111b5c684b91

• You can stick to the side of platforms. This might be intentional but it doesn’t look right and it’s quite frustrating: https://gyazo.com/212087e1cd5e4ade1189790272d46317

• I’m not a fan of the art. I get that you were going for a simplistic style and that’s fine but I feel like the palette used isn’t very cohesive. I’d recommend using a pre-made palette from a site like Lospec

• I’d also recommend looking into some other techniques to improve the feel of movement. Things like input forgiveness and coyote time

• The art is all very clean up until this circular thing which is a bit jarring with how blurry it is: https://gyazo.com/c38bc126f7152e744d0d109596541f8d

• The music is good but it seems to be lacking in sound effects

• I didn’t get a video of it but on the level which first has the yellowish backdrop I wasn’t able to move in mid-air. Instead I would just move a little bit to the right/left and then be stuck there in mid-air until I fell to the ground

• The description says the red guy has super speed but it seems like he’s also able to jump an infinite number of times

Gameplay was kinda similar to thomas was alone. Good job btw.

nice job, there are some things to keep in mind for your next game: the relation between the sideways speed and the falling/jumping speed feels off, either slow down the player, or increase the gravity and jump speed. Also, the sides of the platforms are very sticky yet there's no where to go from there, you could add some sort of ledge grab or wall jump feature, or just slide down faster. 
But, of course, it was a fun little game!

simple but fun! so interesting there are real man voice in the sound