It’s really just a small tweak, but maybe a second screenshot?
TheMetalCarrotDev
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Hi. Just wanted to say that if a game is marked as using AI, it doesn’t always mean it uses AI art, because it can be marked as AI for using AI-assisted code, writing, etc.
From what I’ve noticed, some might also use the tag on the side of caution, like if they make their own art but use a photo filter that could use AI.
Here’s my review:
The writing is great, and the design is on-point. My eyes also tended to drift to the right side image of the exterior. I was thinking it’d be neat to have a version of the right side (the detailed image) in pale colors (a color version), as well. It’s one of those devil is in the details type things, that doesn’t necessarily change the gameplay experience, but can add to presentation.
Anyways, that’s my whole review. The interior looks good.
If you want to check out one of my games, I recommend:
https://themetalcarrotdev.itch.io/the-tornado-trial
I feel it’s a game that challenges people to do stuff and be creative.
Hi,
You found the right place to ask!
I can certainly check it out.
Fair note, I don’t really strongly scrutinize other’s works as part of a review, instead discussing what I liked and offering a potential design suggestion here and there. For me, if a work has achieved the intentions of the author, then it has achieved its desired effects.
This is a thread for introductions.
To start:
Hi, I’m TheMetalCarrotDev. I’m probably best known for the TTRPGs I’ve made, and being an artist for Robot Rabbits in the Library (my partner, formerly known as The Librarian).
If there was a TTRPG mechanic I was most known for in my games, I would say open-ended elements - something featured in some of my games, that inspired me to create a Q & A page to talk about it and other things (page can be accessed from my creator page).
Some things I like include music, the writings of H. G. Wells, and indie games.
Hope to see you around!
Current Endurance.
As for the concept of the game… it’s one that takes a bit, but I’d say the key word is trial, with the theme of hardship. You end up with a trial that’s so tough, whomever set the trial is trying to adapt it to your own abilities. So when you see a little success, the trial also gets tougher. This is one of the reasons why reluctance is expressed in the opening line.


















































































































































































































