"God wills it" is an underrated plot device that I need to see more of in this universe!!! What a fun and exciting little adventure with a unexpected twist!
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Gabriella's Sacrifice's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #20 | 3.643 | 3.643 |
| Overall | #28 | 3.512 | 3.512 |
| Adherence to Theme | #30 | 3.393 | 3.393 |
| Concepts & Originality | #46 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
Ranked from 28 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I loved the characters and the events that unfolded, and your writing was great!
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Truth on the HorizonI really enjoyed the flow and tone of this story especially in the beginning. the characters seem interesting and I enjoy how you used existing lore to characterize them saving words rather than spelling out everything about them.
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Failure to EradicateI love the ratman! Wish we could get more stories about them. Too bad about Gabriella tho. :/
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Brothers OPR Writing Jam #10I really liked the set-up of the God-Queen's vision and the unexpected payoff.
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