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Truth on the Horizon's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #9 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Overall | #9 | 3.846 | 3.846 |
| Flow & Clarity | #13 | 3.846 | 3.846 |
| Adherence to Theme | #15 | 3.692 | 3.692 |
Ranked from 26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Excellent.
Thank you!
great read! Great story!
Thank you very much!
Immediately felt myself pulled in to the story, with fantastic concepts through out
Thank you so much! That means a lot to me.
A man with such will that he refused to be spaghettified by a black hole. 5/5
Thanks! The hardest part for my brain was, "How do you survive a black hole?" when spaghettification is obviously your primary risk. ;-)
The answer, of course, is "(brain) Magic!"
Love your flow, very comfortable and readable! I always love to find shorts that immerse you in the eatheral-ness of psychic science!
Love your flow, very comfortable and readable! I always love to find shorts that immerse you in the eatheral-ness of psychic science!
Thank you so much!
I absolutely loved this story. I was totally drawn in after the first paragraph! Crystal clear adherence to the theme on multiple levels, great job!
Thanks so much!!
Really liked the cybernetic twists and the psychic mantra elements! It fits well into the theme. Could use a bit more originality in the concept though, feels a bit familiar. Great pacing!
Thank you!
Some of it was a bit gard to follow but my favorite story thus far. The space-time theme was great.
Thank you!
Very nice!
Thanks so much!
nice, what came to mind was the old inquisitor 54mm model for the lead character (if intentional it was a great callback)
Yes! That model and Hector Rex inspired me to create the miniature that in turn inspired the character Lucius Cimber. So, it's maybe... half of an intentional callback?