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In the Name of a God's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #30 | 3.765 | 3.840 |
| Flow & Clarity | #31 | 3.452 | 3.520 |
| Overall | #36 | 3.439 | 3.507 |
| Adherence to Theme | #45 | 3.099 | 3.160 |
Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I was glad to see a story centered on the Ghostly Undead. Nice story.
I imagined Saint Bartholomew as a Mechanicus Magus once and the image won't leave my head. Good story though
I haven't got her to write for GDF yet, but I will let her know the encouragement for his future legend :)
I really enjoyed the writing style and the characters. the way Bartholomew and Alastayr are written really make them come to life.
I loved the world-building in your story!
I enjoyed this story a lot, especially the Saint Bartholomew character voice, which I thought was very well done! The one thing that was missing for me was a way to tie it into the game and the setting - I think for this jam, the story would really benefit from being an Age of Fantasy story instead of just a fantasy one. This issue definitely didn't detract from my enjoyment of your story, though - nicely done!
Very good.
thanks for submitting this! Great!
Sweet ending