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I enjoyed the story. Written well with cool characters.

oof, that sacrifice was brutal.

That was a really fun story. The ending really tied it all together.

I enjoy when the plan goes right. It was really heartwarming.

That ending was hilarious and set up perfectly.

I really enjoy how this fits the theme. Heist gone wrong is fun and I wasn’t expecting that ending.

haven’t seen many Havoc dwarfs. I really like how you wrote them and their interaction with the orca.

wow, this was really cool. The form was a really good choice. There aren’t many stories with rebel guerullas and I think this once personified them perfectly. The story was written well enough that It could have been submitted without the last section but the last section was a good addition and helped wrap it up.

I enjoyed the chaos-orcs. They were fun. I also enjoyed how you wrote the DAO being dependent on AI and when it fails how they panic. It makes a lot of sense and is a good addition.

I loved the subtlety of the theme. The slow build up was great with the little details and foreshadow finishing with a beautiful ending. 

Could you please upload in PDF format as the rules state. Would love to read your story but can’t on mobile.

Robot destroyers aren't used often and I enjoy how you wrote them in comparison to the other parts of the robot legions.

I enjoy the characterization of the boss and how you wrote the orcs in a non-Warhammer way and how you worked in the dwarf-orc rivalry.

I enjoyed the report style to the story. At the beginning I was worried that it would get boring but I was proven wrong.

it took two readings but I love the action in this story. It was quick and brutal. I also like the characterization. Like how you showed that beledir never really trusted the dark elves.

I didn’t know a hammer could be used as a time travel device. LOL. I absolutely loved your writing style and the way that you wrote the dwarfs voice. I struggled a little differentiating between queen piper and master knight mir but I was reading quickly. You fit a lot in 1000 words and did it very well. Loved how it looked around at the end and tied up the time travel question.

It was a very fun setting. You don’t see many knights on ships. I enjoyed the addition of the angel. Naming the theme in the title and at the end of the story is somewhat taboo.

Rats! I enjoyed the action of the story. It was concise and easily readable. 

It can be very hard to write a sequel. Balancing connecting it to the original story and making it readable to new people. You did this very well. 

I love how this story is written as a poem and with iambic pentameter as well. It’s always great when authors push the format and make new things. 

not many people write about ogres much less make them the protagonist. I really enjoyed the vibe of the story. you really got the feel of ogres down.

HELL YEAH, Eric the deamonslayer. I really loved how you built up the characters and showed their emotion right to the pinnacle of the story.

I really love the three part layout of the story. you really got the battlefield vibes going with the medics point of view and the tension that come from knowing Oscar is getting messed up. you definantly got the most out of 1000 words 

with the new lore book OPR rewrote some of the lore of the human inquisition. I tried to remain faithful to the new lore. Thank you for the feedback

definitely grimdark. I enjoyed the story. The ending was definitely a highlight.

Viktor’s are officially the worst LOL. I enjoyed the story. I really like how you used the perspective.

I really enjoyed the flow and tone of this story especially in the beginning. the characters seem interesting and I enjoy how you used existing lore to characterize them saving words rather than spelling out everything about them.

A very grotesque and grimdark story.  you wrote imagery very well and there were many descriptions that I could almost see.

I really enjoyed how well this story fit the theme. It was  filled with twists and turns right until the end. 

I really love how you captured the feel of the duchies of vinci while also making them distinct. You used a very interesting and out of the box concept.

I really enjoyed the worldbuilding of this story. There is a nice contrast between the grungy city and the governor and the golden lions. I really liked the diversity of battle brothers and their dementor. 

I really enjoyed the writing of the story.  It was very controlled and consistent slowly adding details right up to the climax. I also really like how to portrayed the DAO. 

I really love the custom artwork. the voice of this story is very unique and works well with the point of view. I recognized some of the names from Tardom's desert adventure. I'm glad they will get their comeuppance.

I really enjoyed the writing style and the characters. the way Bartholomew and Alastayr are written really make them come to life.

this story was really good. I enjoyed the protagonist and their stream of consciousness.  

thank you for the comment. I was pushing for ratmen that were corrupted by living in the radioactive sewer too much however it makes them seem a lot like space skaven more than OPR rats that are sick.

I really enjoyed the confusion of the story. You really balanced the mystery of the situation while still keeping the story clear. 

I really enjoyed the action and tension of the story. I was really sitting on the edge of my seat.

I love the vibes of the story. The tripods looming over the hill and attacking was pretty awesome. I enjoyed the ending. It was a nice build up to the strong emotions.