Really well written. I'm not particularly invested in the Starhost but the story flowed so well it was an easy and enjoyable read. I especially liked how the end was written, well done
Play book
One Last Chance's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #5 | 4.192 | 4.192 |
| Overall | #8 | 3.795 | 3.795 |
| Flow & Clarity | #11 | 3.808 | 3.808 |
| Adherence to Theme | #27 | 3.385 | 3.385 |
Ranked from 26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
Love how lizardy the characters are, from the way their movement is described to their speech. Excellent names too.
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The Portal OpensFantastically written, great job of conveying the emotions of the cast. Brilliant to see some Starhost stories.
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A F-Orc in the RoadI do love me some Starhost goodness. First models I saw were the Geckos with shields on a YouTube battle report with goobertown. Dived in a bit recently, got the free files waiting to come off supports. Planning on a full force (feel they missed a trick with not calling the heavy dinos Tankylosaurus but there we are).
Might have to write more on these space lizards in the next jam :)
Solid story with writing that had me fully invested. Absolutely would read more. Genuinely great writing!
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Enemy of my Enemynice adherence to low/no gravity concerns, very much enjoyed this outing, well done!
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Hyve PlagueHa, what a fun story. Witty, and tragic. Truly the best combo. Who would have known you could bring so much life and vigour to a bunch of lizards. Loved the names too!
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Scraps of SanityAlright now I'm sad for Ba'Kra'Thu.
Very well written story, I actually felt immersed in it.
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The Heist - OPR Writing Jam #11You got me feeling sympathy for an aligator man lol. Well done! Loved the names too. Did you come up with them, or are they actual character names? I'm not too familiar with the Starhosts
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A Dusty Demise
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