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The Constant of Change's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #35 | 3.373 | 3.556 |
| Flow & Clarity | #42 | 2.688 | 2.833 |
| Overall | #44 | 2.846 | 3.000 |
| Adherence to Theme | #46 | 2.477 | 2.611 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I may be reading it wrong, but it feels like there rebel guerillas have some (or just insinuated) connection here with havoc change demons.
Or perhaps they (the daemons) are joining in too.
I really like this story, especially the twist at the end. Despite this being framed as a sort of pamphlet or advertisement I felt myself rooting for the rebels and to find out the twist (not going to mention what the twist is as too not spoil future readers) was really interesting and compelling.
I think it kind of feels like a slog to read in that it is basically a history textbook. Appreciately abridged in the face of the World Book sure, and a great document for its own purpose but kind of a slog when grading so many other entries.
Very appreciated you read it. I rather lean toward trying (emphasis in "try") to write texts giving "vibes", and I tend to produce this kind of results. I should try to go for stories and give more dynamism to text.
wow, this was really cool. The form was a really good choice. There aren’t many stories with rebel guerullas and I think this once personified them perfectly. The story was written well enough that It could have been submitted without the last section but the last section was a good addition and helped wrap it up.
Thank you. It is true there are few stories about Rebel Guerrillas. I hope it changes, it is a faction (or factions) I think could give some more differences to the setting of GDF vs one... More known ;) . I wish i'd polished more the text, i spotted several mistakes.