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A jam submission

The EnvelopeView game page

An in-browser interactive story for InkJam 2020
Submitted by garoo (@commandergaroo) — 3 hours, 32 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Theme#54.2504.250
Originality#143.8333.833
Overall feeling#203.7503.750
Narration#213.5003.500

Ranked from 12 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted

This was a great concept that kept me trying over and again. I managed to get into the knowledge base entry and read what was there, but kept on through impending dooms. Really good.

Submitted

Excellent. Great presentation and so many crucial touches to streamline and make interesting the necessary repetitions.

Submitted

I loved that knowledge base idea, so cool! Your world-building and sense of suspense was great. Nice work!

Submitted

I really enjoyed this one, it produced many a chuckle. The only thing is I wish I could have used the knowledge database but it never produced any results. Is it still being implemented? 

Developer

Thanks :) The knowledge base works, but I implemented it five hours before deadline, so there are very few entries  😬

Submitted

Fair enough, I'll give it another play and try my luck :)  Let me know what you think of my entry if you've got a minute.

Submitted

I enjoyed it - but I don't know whether there's an ending I've not got, or it just continues in a loop once you've worked out what's going on. Could only find one word recognised by the knowledge base, maybe that's it? (Don't want to say more to indicate what occurred in case I spoil it!) I *think* I've tried all the possible options everywhere else, including the phone conversation.

Developer

Yeah, the "good ending" (which, in what seemed like a better idea at the time, is more of an arbitrary end where the game just stops prompting you) is locked behind a knowledge base entry. Let's just say it's a four-character identifier :)

Submitted

I struggled a little bit in the end with the phone conversation but overall it was a great experience. Great writing too!

Developer

Thank you! :) Yeah, that conversation ended up a little too unforgiving / poorly signposted ^^;