This is a beautiful game that ties the story, the art, and the music in one bundle of polished Origami-works. Congratulations. 

Nice art, this game seems to be a survival horror. Having a story and cutscenes is really cool, it gives off the vibe of a dark, bedtime horror story for children, especially with the art style.

There are quite a few bugs I noticed; I’ll list some of them in case it helps:

• If you crouch and then jump when going though somewhere underneath, the player gets stuck in the jump animation gets locked. This can be fixed by adding a condition that prevents the player from jumping while crouching if the ceiling collider is colliding.
• In certain areas, specifically where the book stacks are used as platforms, if you jump around and spam the jump key, the character can get locked in a falling animation and can’t recover unless you restart.

(When the animation got locked, character cannot do anything other than moving left and right or restart)

Some other areas that could be improved:

• After climbing a ledge, the character feels slightly misaligned, like it shifts position before snapping back into place.
• The enemy’s fireball attack feels unavoidable; you can’t jump over it without falling off the platform.
• The horizontal moving platform doesn’t carry the player along, causing the character to slide off instead of sticking to it.
  

Having the option to restart is very helpful when getting stuck due to these bugs. Overall, there’s definitely room for improvement, but it’s a solid game with potential.

You got great aesthetics in your game, I liked it quite a bit!

The animations feel just a little clunky, a bit charming, with a bit of polish you have a great platformer :)

The aesthetic of this game is a standout! A few bugs, but nothing detrimental to my gameplay. The character designs were my favorite part of it. Also, the music was very nice. 

The game looks very good! but I felt like the perspective was a bit off

Also I had a lot of bug with the enemies so, unfortunately  I couldnt go to the end of the game 

Really Fantastic Platformer! Boss Fight, Sidescroller, And "Stealth" Platformer In One Package, All With A Depply Unique And Standout Art Style. The Controls Were A Little Clunky At Times, And A Couple Of The Sound Effects Seemed To Get Stuck In A Loop, But Overall, Really Well Done. Hats Off To Your Composer, The Music Also Felt Very Strong And Thematic.

Fun platformer! Unfortunately I got stuck under the book which locked me in a pose lol.

Apart from that, the animation was lovely, the art is gothic and creepy! I like the designs of the enemies as well, reminds me of Little Nightmares. I would love to see a full release of this with bigger enemies and different mechanics, maybe folding up to fit small spaces?

Like the art and music. I did run into a few bugs, primarily regarding the movement of the origami character as sometimes he'd get locked in animation and I could only move left/right but definitely see potential. Well done!

The artstyle is really nice, I like the umbrella gliding, well done. It's a really good start for a nice game in the future.

Amazing art and setting!

Cool aesthetics and gameplay, love the papery feel, and brilliant music! Very well done :)

I like the aesthetic and visual design, pretty cool animation too. But the gameplay is very buggy,  and some obstacles are difficult to get over, like the candle enemy's projectile is hard to jump over.

The aesthetic is so unique, we also went for a paper-like aesthetic for ui but to see it in a whole game and as a 2D side scroller is so cool. Also bonus points for having an actual trailer

Love the setting and the fluidity of the animations! It took me a bit to figure out that I was supposed to use the level hazards against the enemies but once I did I had a lot of fun finding new interactions. Music is also phenomenal.

i played through the whole game and i think the best parts are the art the music and the last escape scene i also think that the story is pretty cool tough getting past specifically the second  candle that shoots flame on the first level is very anoying because you have to time it with the water faling on it  it isnt realy obvious that thats the way your suposed to get past tough ones you get past that its pretty fast but fun experience