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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Writing: how clear and/or interesting is the writing? | #24 | 4.316 | 4.316 |
| Art: how well does the art support the other content? | #35 | 4.421 | 4.421 |
| Overall | #43 | 4.168 | 4.168 |
| Playability: how easy would it be to run this module? | #50 | 3.895 | 3.895 |
| Layout: how easy is it to find all the presented information? | #65 | 4.079 | 4.079 |
| Theme: how well would the module have fit into the Appendix N? | #84 | 4.132 | 4.132 |
Ranked from 38 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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A lot of really fun stuff with a lot of rad pieces! The feel is really strong all throughout and the art helps solidify it!
Absolutely beautiful work. Imaginative and dreamlike. Economically outlines a couple of dramatic struggles between NPCs, giving lots of scope for roleplaying and exploration. Lovely stuff.
The layout looks so good in these vivid psychadelic colors, and doesn’t sacrifice legibility to do so. I really enjoyed the tragic faction play, and the Walled Garden is a great location in and of itself. I could definitely see myself using this module in whole or part in my own Cairn home game. Also, I absolutely adore the Knight & Snapdragon! Great job!
Thanks so much! I was really happy with the layout in the end, Explorer's Design canva template was really helpful there so shout out to them.
If you do use it in your game I'd love to hear how it goes!
Will do! I also promoted your piece over on Bluesky, so hopefully it gets some more eyes on your great lil module
thanks very much! I'm not on anything save Discord and itch so appreciate the boost!
I really liked how interesting and different the adventure hooks were. The writting was clear and the locations felt unique and I liked the short decriptions given for each. Fun magic item for the armour to - Awesome work!
thanks for the kind words!
Love everything in this, the Green Hand and its Fingers are very satisfying. The items and NPCs are all great. Are the nine dead Fingers in the nine sacs??
Thanks you! It's definitely implied they're the Fingers in the glasshouse yeah.
I had a longer description of the Green Hand (detailing the different Fingers, Knuckles, Nails etc in the gang) and this included their plot to be reincarnated in the garden should something happen to them, but it all ended up getting cut for space and left more ambiguous (hopefully not too cryptic in the end!)
Great use of art and an excellent Alice in Wonderland - living garden vibe. Maybe the expansion can have a terrifying tiger Lilly to hide from.