Clean layout with a really nice subtle background, this adventure has some awesome art and I really appreciate its got such a good overview on the first page on whats happening. Really cool idea for the setup of an adventure to, awesome work!
Glad you liked the psychic storm mechanic, also a little hint to players for anyone paying attention to the damage types. Thanks for checking out the adventure and leaving a comment :)
It was alot of fun to make and explore different ways to layout and relay information in an easy to parse way to the GM; im keen to make more adventures. Thank you for such a kind comment and checking out the adventure!
The layout and visual design of this is excellent and doesnt get in the way of readability. I can see this as being a really fun session at the table. Awesome work!
Fantastic use of colour and a really appealing map that is also very clear and easy to read. Great cover and the layout and writing is all very clear. Also thought the mist on the ground combine with vines that pull characters under a really fun combo. Awesome work!
Clean and easy to read layout makes reading the well written adventure really enjoyable. I really liked area 4 with the birds where I found the idea of the switching from life to stone really interesting. Great work on the adventure!
Really like the breakdown of the characters with the Wants, opposes, questioning format. Great that thers some interesting character conflict as well which could be fun to uncover. Awesome map, although I did spend a little while hunting down where the 4. was in the image (found it!). Great to see some hooks included and I really like the idea of this adventure. Amazing work!
Layout is super clean and easy to read. Some really interesting location ideas in here, especially like the sound of the Black Lotus, very creepy image of that mote, which would be fun at the table I'd imagine. Awesome work!
Super cool that you have fit this adventure on just two pages. Really like the way you have done the map here, very cool style and the keeping to just the red and black gives the spread a distinct visual look. Appreciate how readable and clean the text is for this to. Awesome Work!
I really liked how interesting and different the adventure hooks were. The writting was clear and the locations felt unique and I liked the short decriptions given for each. Fun magic item for the armour to - Awesome work!
Great feedback - yes the storm is conjured in the mind by the beast. I'll add a few extra words in the intro to make that clearer after judging. Thank you so much for checking out the game and leaving feedback :)
What an amazing idea and twist. Solid overview which I appreciate lets the GM knows exactly whats going on in one solid short summary. Love the reward being the house for this adventure and I could see this fitting in really well into a campain where you want to give the party a home to live out of. Awesome Work!
Glad you liked the encounters and the Psychic Storm! I do like mechanisms like the storm for giving the GM something easy to push a bit of pacing/tension in an adventure. Thank you so much for checking out the adventure and leaving a comment. :)
Yeah originally I had some very different ideas for the title but liked the idea of the "last eon" refering to a long ago prior age, exploring a resting place of many different travellers. Rather than some of my original ideas which were more "end times" kind of settings. Thank you for checking out the adventure and leaving a comment! :)
Yeah I agree - I do like this for a travel encounter or even for a greater mystery that can be heard about at a town even. Outside the Jam's scope I'd probably add a few extra hooks to the adventure, though for a one-shot I do like starting in the action as quick as possible. Thanks for leaving a comment and checking out the adventure! :)
Thank you very much! I do enjoy a bit of foreshadowing and hints to things when I'm running games, I have found it can help the players to make more informed or interesting choices which is always fun. Appreciate you checking out the adventure and leaving a comment :)
What a great cover, really nice use of font and colour and it really made me want to click on the adventure and find out more. Nice maps in this aswell with a great easy to read visual style. Great Work!
Got to love a bit of heist in a super interesting and creative setting! Very memorable cover and use of colour; really appreciate the GMing sections for the two areas. Awesome Work!
This is a great module, really like the way the scrolls combo together and how you've provided all the maps on the back. Really great ideas here and the layout is clean and really visually appealing. Would be a really fun module to play I think. Awesome Work!
The Worshipper was a later edition to the design but glad I added it in as I think it gives the GM a bit to play with with alot to explore and potential for a social encounter. Thanks for checking out the adventure and leaving a comment!
Glad the treasuers hit the right balance for you, always fun I find to find an item which has a cool effect that players can be creative or useful with. Thanks so much for checking out the adventure and leaving a comment!
Thanks for checking out the adventure and leaving feedback! I do find it helpful personally when theres something ready to go to give a boost to the pacing if needed, glad you liked the psychic storm. :)
Thank you very much for checking out the adventure and leaving a comment! Glad you liked the layout, fitting the D&D stats was a bit of a learning curve of finding what I could take out but glad it all fit! :)
Really cool cover art and use of blues and yellows - really interesting visually. I like the idea of a heist and all the provided cover stories are quite fun; as is the idea to have different honor guard mood rolled on a table. Nice Work!
Awesome idea and a great stylish cover. Really love the font choice and layout, makes it very easy to read. Like the idea of an enthralled town. Nice map to. Great work!
Great vibes - I feel this adventure really nails the Appendix N feel. The layout is clean and all the areas are clearly layed out and I think the grand chamber would be a really fun and exciting location. Great Work!
What an awesome cover with some really cool use of colours, very evocative and made me want to take a look. The idea of the blighted rooms are all quite interesting. I really like the illustration at the back and the different forms the blight can take are a cool idea. Awesome work!
I like the cover - really interesting. Nicely layed out and I like the idea of the a shifting dungeon vault. Some really cool ideas in the tables especially enjoyed reading some of the environmental threat ideas. Nice Work!
The idea and slightly unsettling vibe I got from this is really cool. I like the direction you took this title in, I can imagine this being a very unique game at the table. Also really liked the use of wants, has and rumours for characters. Awesome work!
Clean readable layout and easy to follow, appreciate all the location descriptions are within the two page spread of the map to. Really nice that you've included a clear introduction, hooks and events table and some creepy creatures to. Awesome Work!
Thank you! I really wanted to fit all the stat blocks on the one page, with how big D&D stat blocks tend to be the challenge I wasn't expecting was trying to prune the details down to absolutely what is necisary. Glad you like the acid pop, always a fun surprise I found haha. Thanks so much for checking out the adventure and leaving a comment!
Very cool eye catching cover. Nice font choices and the adventure is easy to read with clear text and font size. I like the looming threat of Gan! Awesome work!
Appreciate how clear and easy to read this module is. Excellent map and I really like the addition of the roll tables with some really interesting ideas, especially with the cultist trinkets. Awesome work!
Thank you for checking out the adventure and leaving a comment! I had a bunch of fun making this adventure and laying it out so it was easy to run at the table. Also glad you liked the font choices, always satisfying to find the right font for projects :D
It was a fun challenge to create descriptions which were short susinct and hopefully useable at the table, but still painted a picture of what the location was. Thanks so much for checking out the game and leaving a comment!
