Cool premise and really really like the enchantman, especially the art!
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Oh damn, this one is cracking! Initial impression was it's really busy but spending time with it I can see a lot of smart layout choices throughout and it's actually very accessible. The little notes throughout are great, like a RPG group has ran and ran this module into the ground with all the various chaos that entails.
Public domain art used really well here too, top notch :)
That map is cracking! Really excellent little details. The doom clock progression is really great writing too, felt very dark indeed.
Only thing I'd suggest is giving the layout a bit more room to breathe. Bigger margins and maybe using that 4th page to space the text out a bit and add some spot art to break things up a bit
Excited to see the next version :)
Thanks for the kind words! I came up with those 4 prisoners and couldn't figure out which to cut/focus on, so it ended up being pretty crowded in there.
Hadnt thought of the party having different secret missions, in my head it was the gang having a shared goal but I like that idea a lot as a way to create chaos!





