This is literally the first time I'm giving out all 5s on a game for this jam. Its perfect - perfect - down to every minute detail. Even though I could see where the story would go from the first foreshadowing signs, it still kept me intrigued and left me yearning for more until I completed the game. The art was simple, but perfectly suitable for the scope of the jam and the story that needed to be told. 

10/10

A really gripping story.  It was great.  Some of the dialogue was quite repetitive, even though it fits the theme.  The topic was very heavy.

Some of the text would go run off screen at times, even in full screen mode.

Well this one’s deep! I really am not a fan of point and click games but this one kept me playing till the end. The only thing that I would change is how the phone could be used, maybe it could add to the conversation itself. But all in all, Well Done!

I like how the theme is implemented here, the story is well presented and easy to follow and the artwork is decent. The background sound design is very detailed and adds a lot to the immersion.  I would prefer if there was a little less unnecessary details added to the narrative as there is a large amount of reading and some parts have huge walls of text that significantly distract from the experience (the phone messages for example). As a personal preference i dont typically enjoy this type of game but i can see that this is well made especially considering the time constraint.

I loved the story and art. Definitely have to give 5stars for art and narrative. And the first time the nurse flashed red it scarred the hell out of me.

Love the story, narrative, and the art!

It's almost perfect, but there is a tiny problem in UI/UX design, making it feel a little clunky and less polished, for example, sometimes the phone and the selection button overlap and blocking the choice button.

Can't go back to the SMS and email selection on the phone, but need to put the entire phone down, press the phone again to switch between those.

The repetitive dialogue should be able to fast-forward and be skippable, like most visual novels, so it feels less mouse-spammy.

However, I'm sure you will polish it up if you have enough time. Great work for the Jam submission!

Interesting implementation of the theme, I felt that the art was definitely right in the sweet spot between immersive and uncanny for the situation, and others said the ui is ugly but I can see there's a lot of work put into it, gj! Good story too!

The game is clever. In story, progression and gameplay ! I liked it a lot ! The only down side i got, is the artwork getting me out of the narration (i don't know especially why), but overall i liked it a lot !

A pretty nice story game! the changing light rays from the window were a good way to tell time, the game only did feel kinda mouse spammy though, but besides that the story was nice and the artstyle was terrifyingly good!

I'm really impressed at how compelling a narrative you were able to craft. It was a rewarding short story to puzzle through with a satisfying ending. You've done a really good job in writing. For the rest of the game, particularly the UI, changing the UI to non Unity-default would go a long way. For instance, the thought cloud buttons were really good, I thought they really reflected the state of his mind. I think changing up the default buttons etc would tie this game together a lot. Side note, I LOVED the way the light changed in his room when the sun went down, that was such a nice touch.

Well a story I was invested in at every moment in a jam game? Very impressive, great art too, it all fit the vibe perfectly! Without going into detail to avoid spoilers I'm reminded of Silent Hill 2 a little, there's not much to say as storytelling and pacing was just really well handled, maybe one issue I faced was sometimes I accidentally skipped dialogue like 4 times due to just trying to get through the repeating conversations and accidentally missing a new line, still though really great job, nailed the vibe and story!