Thanks for sending the game link!

Positives:

1. The pixel art is fantastic, and I loved the game’s visual style. The walking animation of the character was especially fun—it had a humorous touch that added to the charm.
2. The music is excellent, and it’s great that it has a sense of progression as you play, adding depth to the experience.

Negatives:

1. The controls felt a bit strange. I didn’t quite understand why interaction buttons were on different keys. What is the difference between the Z and A keys?
2. I couldn’t skip dialogues. I played the game twice because I was worried I might miss something. However, on my second playthrough, I couldn’t skip the dialogue with the mother, which slowed things down.

Conclusion: It’s a shame that the game is so short and even more disappointing that the street segment didn’t make it in. The game ended quickly, but what was there was enjoyable. Thanks again for sharing your game—it was a pleasant experience.

Thanks for sending the game link!

Positives:

1. The noir-style visuals were cool, and I liked that the apartment was fully furnished rather than empty, giving it a lived-in feel. The giant robot in the room was amusing!
2. The voice work for the doctor and ghosts was great. It was especially cool how the monsters whisper to the player, practically driving them to panic.
3. I enjoyed the card mechanic. It adds interest to the gameplay, although it felt a bit limited that we could only boost the character’s health. It feels like there’s potential to develop this mechanic further.
4. The flashlight mechanic was intriguing. It’s cool that you can only see the monsters in the flashlight beam, adding a supernatural element.
5. The mechanic where monsters don’t kill you right away but teleport you to a random location on the map is clever. Over time, you start to understand that you need to manage your health points carefully, especially when trying to retrieve a card that a ghost is blocking.
6. It’s nice that the location expands as you progress, which gives a sense of advancement in the game.
7. I liked the random generation of portal and card locations. It adds variety and makes each playthrough more tense and unpredictable.

Negatives:

1. It would be helpful if players could pause the text to read it calmly. The text flies by too quickly, so I missed some important information from the plague doctor.
2. The monster’s AI felt weak, as it didn’t react to the player’s flashlight or footsteps, which reduced the need to sneak around.
3. While the monster is supposed to be a ghost, its movement felt clunky and a bit strange, as it passed through textures. Though this could be a plus by allowing the monster to ambush the player suddenly, the fact that you can feel when it’s near undermines that element of surprise.
4. The door colliders were somewhat inconvenient. It took me a while to realize I had to aim precisely at a specific part of the door to open it. Until then, I thought some doors were locked. Additionally, it was unclear which doors were usable and which were not. It might be better not to include doors that can’t be opened.

Conclusion: This is a cool game with a strong visual style, which is one of its best features. Initially, it feels like a horror game, but as you get more comfortable with the mechanics, it takes on a roguelike feel. It was a unique experience—thanks for the game!

Thanks for sharing the game!

Positives:

1. It’s great that there’s a fully functional menu. Being able to customize the game through various settings is fantastic.
2. The save feature is a nice touch. It’s always appreciated when a developer considers the player’s time.
3. Having multiple save files is also great! It’s helpful for players who might want to explore different paths.
4. The visual style is excellent, though I’d love to see artwork for other characters, even though I understand you may not have had time to create it yet. The dark silhouettes for secondary characters fit the tone well.
5. The story’s beginning is well done and sets a strong, atmospheric tone. If the story keeps this vibe, it’ll be amazing.

Negatives:

1. It’s disappointing that there’s no music or SFX, even though there are settings for them.
2. The main drawback is that the game is very short. While choices exist, they don’t currently lead to different outcomes.

Conclusion: It’s tough to provide a thorough review because the game is still very short and unfinished, but it looks promising. Thanks for the experience!

Thank you for sharing the game! I'll start with the positives:

Positives:

1. The low-poly aesthetic is fantastic. The game has a striking look, and all the elements align with a cohesive style.
2. Having a radio with music is a nice touch, though I was a bit disappointed this time that it only had one sample.
3. I enjoyed the fact that the apartment is largely interactive, even if the interaction doesn’t affect much.
4. Cleaning up around the house is always good—unless it leads you to death.

Negatives:

1. It was hard to find the dog since it was sitting in plain sight but made no sound. Even after I gave it some meat, there was no reaction.
2. The ending really disappointed me. I expected the maniac to set up traps, turn off lights, and create a tense atmosphere. Instead, it was far more mundane, which was disappointing.
3. I struggled to find the trash, and for some reason, it ended up being in a room I missed, with the trash bag sitting on the toilet. What? There’s a full trash can in the kitchen—why not take that out?

Conclusion: The game has great art design and immersive elements that help draw the player into the experience. However, the 'maniac' aspect was missing, replaced only by a cheap jump scare. It felt like this ending was a quick solution to meet a tight deadline. If that's the case, it’s understandable. The choice with the candy was also a bit unclear to me—I wasn’t sure why it was there. Either way, thank you for making the game; it was enjoyable to play!

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Thank you for sharing the game! I'll start with the positives.

Positives:

1. I really enjoyed your vision for visual style in games. I also followed the link to some of your other works on Steam and noticed that you have a unique approach to narrative and visual storytelling, something reminiscent of biopunk. Your games are pure art!
2. The story is very interesting. It’s quite simple, yet you add details elegantly, like the setting in space, the futuristic society that doesn’t tolerate the weak, and the mysterious void entity overtaking the boy's mind. There’s a lot left unsaid, which leads to thoughtful reflection—very impressive.
3. The music creates tension. At times, I felt the music was a bit too quiet or subdued, but it seemed to shift tone towards the end, adding to the atmosphere. The sound design is well done.
4. The gameplay is arcade-like, and though I died a few times (mainly missing mines), I have no issues with it. I think you prioritized telling a story over complex gameplay, which I appreciate.

Negatives:

1. I would have liked a bit more variety in enemies, maybe even a boss at the end. I’d also suggest a mechanic where the character gains new abilities, like a wave attack that destroys all enemies nearby, which would fit the narrative well. I missed having more of a challenge, but maybe the point was to show the protagonist’s dominance over enemies.
2. Although I praised the music, I found myself unable to recall it by the end of the game. I think more distinct musical cues could make a lasting impression. Or maybe I just have a memory problem :)

Conclusion: This is a small game with an intriguing and unsettling story. I enjoyed playing it and appreciated the minimal yet effective storytelling style. Unlike other games, it’s not heavy-handed; you provide just the right amount of information, which I truly value. Thank you for making this game—I loved it!

Hi! Thank you for sending the link to your game! I’ll start with the positives:

Positives:

1. I really enjoyed the NES-era graphics. I don’t often play games with this type of look and gameplay, but your game brought back childhood memories. The retro visuals are great, without unnecessary details and with a focus on the heroine.
2. I liked that there’s a world map. It’s nice to see the path ahead. Some comments mentioned it feels like Zelda 2. I haven’t played that one, but now I feel I need to!
3. I love the character design. She has great running and jumping animations. If you add a smooth knife attack animation, it would be perfect!
4. I’m not usually a fan of platforming games, maybe because modern ones demand you give your all just to pass a tough level. Here, though, the platforming is subtle, adding variety without overwhelming the gameplay. I appreciate that.
5. It’s cool that there’s a boss to escape from at the end, though I didn’t quite understand why the bees and boss have one style, while the heroine has another.

Negatives:

1. I found a bug. Sometimes, after taking damage, I lose control of the character. Pressing the "S" button seemed to fix it, but oddly, this causes her to jump backward before control returns. Very strange.
2. I was really disappointed that there’s no 8-bit soundtrack in the game. Overall, it lacks music and sound effects.
3. The game seems to have a story, but it’s hidden from me. There’s no setup; we just start in a van in the woods with a knife, going house to house. It almost feels like we’re playing as a female slasher!

Conclusion: The game is short but cozy. With music, a clear story, and fewer bugs, it would be fantastic. As it stands, though, I still enjoyed it.

Questions:

1. What does the "S" button do?
2. What’s the purpose of the second house? One of the houses is completely empty—was something meant to be there?
3. Is it a bug or a feature that the knife stays with the heroine after death?
4. Could you share the story of the game? Even just a synopsis or basic setup?

Hi! Thank you for sharing the link to your game.

Positives:

1. The retro music is fantastic! It strongly resembles the NES era sound, which is awesome.
2. Even though the combat isn’t fully functional, I can imagine how it’s intended to be. In my mind, it feels dynamic and challenging, where you have to watch the opponent’s moves and strike with counterattacks.
3. I liked the leveling system through items. I’m not entirely sure if the game is a roguelike or RPG, but I understood that through events, we can gain bonuses to stats and buy items in the shop to enhance abilities.
4. The monsters are varied, each with its own mechanics and animations. The character style is well-chosen and visually fitting.
5. When I triggered an event, I realized that we make choices and receive outcomes. I was surprised at the amount of scenarios prepared for these events. I enjoyed the different situations, some of which are really creepy and enhanced by great illustrations!

Negatives:

1. In combat, I could spam the attack button. It felt like an exploit, so you might want to limit players with a stamina system.
2. The main downside is that the game isn’t finished.

Conclusion: It’s a shame you couldn’t complete the game to the level you intended, but it’s still a very cool project with strong features and diverse mechanics. I hope you complete it after the game jam. Thanks again for the game!

Hi! Thank you for sharing the link to your game! I’ll start with the positives:

Positives:

1. The cartoon or even comic-style visuals are simply outstanding. My compliments to your artists for their incredible work on the game’s visuals. The stylized 3D environment with a cartoon look is very inventive, and I’m not exaggerating when I say your game has the most impressive graphics.
2. It’s great that there are multiple characters with dialogue between them. I might have preferred slightly less formal dialogue, but that’s just a personal preference.
3. I appreciate the inclusion of a tutorial, although it feels almost unnecessary and could be removed without taking away from the game.
4. The interactive desk with notes and stories is a fantastic touch. I always enjoy this kind of feature. In our game, we wanted to add something similar inside the truck cabin but didn’t have time. It’s great that you managed to pull it off!
5. The storyline is excellent. I loved the idea of temporal anomalies, reminiscent of films like "Interstellar" or "Looper." These are inspiring choices, and I enjoy grounded sci-fi like this rather than generic supernatural elements.
6. The choice-based dialogues that influence the endings are great. I counted three endings, though there might be four. It’s amazing that you created multiple endings and branching narratives.
7. The solution with the photos is brilliant. It allows the player to partly see what other characters observe, helping them analyze the situation as well. It’s an elegant solution for such a short development period.

Negatives:

1. The first thing I noticed was the text running outside its boundaries. It’s not too distracting, and I’m sure it’ll be an easy fix.
2. I didn’t like that the player essentially just listens, with little actual gameplay. I understand why, given the immense effort needed for the game within such a short time frame, and I’m glad you found a way to work around it. However, it feels like the player was meant to find solutions at the desk, but the desk doesn’t serve a real purpose beyond ambiance.

Conclusion: The game is exceptional and among the best in this game jam. It’s not particularly scary, but the plot follows the spirit of sci-fi horror, where there are no villains—just a dangerous, mysterious situation that the characters must navigate with skill and ingenuity. This game deserves to be developed fully and sold on Steam for $15-20. While playing, a few ideas came to mind that might interest you, so I’ve listed them separately.

Ideas:

1. I think this might be your intention, but I’ll mention it anyway. It would be more engaging if the player directed characters around the secret facility. I imagine that’s what the interactive map on the monitor was meant for.
2. I assume the player is a technician? What if they were a hacker instead? Check out the game "TriumAI" from this game jam, and you’ll see what I mean.
3. I was also reminded of the manual in "The Children of Clay". Give that game a try to understand what I’m referring to.

That’s all from me. Thank you for sharing the game. I enjoyed the story and characters immensely, and I truly hope to see this game on Steam someday. If that happens, I’ll definitely buy it. Thanks for the game!

I would also appreciate it if you would play our game https://itch.io/jam/scream-jam-2024/rate/3038320

Hi! Thank you for sending your game. I’ll start with the positives.

Positives:

1. Great retro horror visuals. All the 3D assets work well together, and it’s clear that people with skill and knowledge worked on the 3D models.
2. The Fatal Frame-style camera mechanic is awesome. I also liked that there’s a first-person view, which isn’t just there for fun but is actually used for finding keys and solving puzzles.
3. It’s cool that there are puzzles. At first, I didn’t notice the symbols on the lock, so I started matching the shapes based on the number of edges or lines, and I came up with "5491." When I went to the lock a second time, I realized the symbols were already drawn there and just needed to be matched. It was an easy puzzle but enjoyable.
4. The monsters are great too. I didn’t have too much trouble with them, but they did kill me once, so I had to restart. And it’s awesome that there’s a final boss!
5. The soundtrack at the end of the game is fantastic. I also appreciated the SFX and the whispering monsters as they approached. This made gameplay a bit easier but enhanced immersion in a good way.

Negatives:

1. It’s nice that the character moves quickly, but I would have liked an option for slower walking. Sometimes it’s hard to control the character because of the high speed.
2. The final boss felt too easy. He appeared, yelled at me, and I just ran away quickly. I didn’t even try photographing him, so I’m not entirely sure what he looks like, but he seemed like a huge worm from Dune.

Conclusion: The game is excellent, with interesting and rarely seen mechanics. The final segment with the boss could be made more challenging. It might be worth making the level design a bit more complex to make escaping from him harder. Thanks again for the game!

Hi!Can you tell me what to do in this room? I can't find a way out

Hi! You've already submitted your game, and I’ll definitely play it now:)

Played, rated, and left feedback for your game on the submission page!

Thank you for sharing your game!

Positives:

1. The game is quite creepy. I'm not a fan of FNAF games, and I’m not very familiar with how to play them, but your game definitely made me nervous.

Negatives:

1. As others have mentioned in the comments, the menu is very dark.
2. A couple of times, the game gave me a critical error and then closed, so I wasn’t able to see the jump scare.
3. I don’t understand why the game blocks me from using the cameras at the start, with a message saying 'you’ve been hacked' appearing on the screen. What am I supposed to do about this? Am I doing something wrong?

Conclusion: The game feels small and unpolished and clearly needs more work. Please don’t take my words personally—I always aim to give honest feedback, and there will always be others to offer praise. I hope you gain more experience by the next game jam and make even better games! Thanks again for sharing your game!

You can also play our game https://itch.io/jam/scream-jam-2024/rate/3038320

hello! I'll do a review on your games tomorrow!

hello! I'll do a review on your games tomorrow!