Interesting submission! It would have been interesting to see some branching options. but I understand the choice to make it linear.  I liked the poem. 

I genuinely have no idea how to rate this as a game :) But you have a great talent for poetry.

Everything about this game strung a lot of weird chords before I actually played it. Well, "game" and "play". It's a poem, minimalistic in aesthetic, and the 2 comments about it are about the ending. So I took out my headphones and turned on the light, expecting a screamer or something to pop up in a weird fashion.

The reality was far more bizarre. The anticipation had my heart rating, and the final bits of the poem actually shocked me. Not much of a game, not much of interaction, and still, this submission was very impactful.

To move people with words and expectations, you've got a talent for writing. It may look like an exaggeration to say that this is one of my favorite submissions to the jam, but through sheer narrative and a powerful shock, this poem became one of the most memorable submissions. Cheers! 🐳

that ending though omg