Extremely good writing!! The story and world was incredibly compelling, and developed itself quite nicely - brought to mind The Hexologists as well as the Parasol Protectorate books, in a very satisfying way. The characters were engaging, and the plot well-paced. I also was a fan of your selection of music - as someone who often listens to dnd/medieval-y music compilations in the background while working, I recognized a few favorites! The sprites make good use of the minimal style, and splashes of red hit nicely whenever they appear (especially in that foggy chase sequence). Well done!!

Really nice story with a rich lore and world. Loved the premise of bringing fantasy and magic into Victorian London. I also really enjoyed the visuals, it was unique and what caught my eye originally! All in all great job and best of luck with the book😁

Ooh, I enjoyed this! ✨ I've got a soft spot for Victorian Gothic stories, and this is a charming steampunk-flavored iteration on the genre. I quite like how the character sprites are handled--while incredibly pared-back, it's expressive, stylistically unique, and still perfectly serves to reflect the emotions and actions of the characters. Delightful as Arabella and Jack are, I'm particularly fond of Eyre, whose physical descriptors (impractical, pinpoint feet and hands, the paradox of her limited speech) feel like an especially incisive representation of women's treatment during (...and before, and after...) the Victorian era.

I'm happy with the ending I received, where Eyre now lives happily ever after with Bronte as a self-sufficient (robo)cat-(robo)lady. 💚 

The story's really good! The idea is super interesting and the twist is really cool, I like the decent into darker and darker themes, and the concept of a twisted version of a character you knew was really creepy and well done. Nice work!

The starting music was quite loud. The main menu looked quite pretty. The in game music however was very fantastical. Its surprising to see a visual novel entry that doesnt have all the options directly displayed. Not a big issue but quite uncommon. The menu font is a bit hard to read. The story was nice and I found the art style for the characters a nice choice, stands out quite a bit, does conceal some of the depth of a character but works for the game. Also the game was quite static, not a whole lot of character movement and such. Good work for what I assume to be a single person based on the others being general links? either way, good job!

this was sweet! not sure the ui is fitting well, but I'm far from the best person to tell people what is a good or bad ui

loved the music!