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A jam submission

The HatchlingView game page

A winged student seeks to escape their immortal city.
Submitted by rebeccamwrites (@rebeccamwrites) — 23 hours, 4 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Narration#24.4174.417
Overall feeling#54.0834.083
Originality#84.0834.083

Ranked from 12 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted

Beautiful to read and a great build-up of the story :)

Submitted

Imaginative and lovely writing, really enjoyed this.

Submitted(+1)

Intelligent writing, great resolution, and (as some others have mentioned) epic worldbuilding.

Developer

Thanks very much for playing it :)

(+1)

Fantastic, surreal, very nice story.

Submitted

I think the the in-between place was when it grabbed me.  Good writing.

Developer

Thanks, I did worry I spent too much time building up to it.

Submitted(+1)

I loved it, the stealth crawl at the beginning, and the messaging about you can't have life without death. I chose to live.

Submitted(+1)

I loved it ! Amazing worldbuilding, I was just dying to know more about the universe you've created ! The escape sequence worked great, I was on the edge the whole time.