Like Stefano mentioned, I wish there were some choices the player makes. I couldn't get immersed into the story, because of those weird talking sounds in the background. So the game became more of a press space as quickly as possible to get to the end, type of game.

I don't like that much visual novel. I only played this genre when I studied Japanese.

The sound is unpleasant. I undertand it was done on purpose, but every time you click when you are fast to read, the sound seems reset.

Graphics and story are nice, I guess It the most important in this genre of game.

First of all, the art for this is really amazing and I liked it a lot. Also the background sound fx are weel made, a little creepy space musci will surely help this game.

Speaking of gameplay, I didn't understand what to do at all. I finished the story just pressing enter the whole time and I felt like watching a movie rather then playing a videogame. I looked at the help panel and I was even more confused. If I pressed enter or space it doesn't change enything.

I mean, the story is nice even if sometimes I didn't totaly get it. I see that english is not your native language, it is not mine either, so I understand it is hard to explain a story so complex like that.

Again, the story is very interesting but if I had a little UI with two dialogue choices I would have felt like playing a game but it is just a story where you press enter the whole time. 

I don't know maybe I didn't get how the game works but it was really hard to understand.

Good luck for the jam!

If you want to check out our game this is the link https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/477069

Great game! Interesting story with a twist. Love the graphics and creepy atmosphere. Awesome job!

Not sure if you're into top down shooters but you can check my game! It has little bits of story too :D