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A jam submission

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Submitted by Deceleris (@deceleris) — 15 hours, 36 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Game Design#293.8003.800
Innovation#553.5003.500
Overall#593.5503.550
Audio#613.7003.700
Graphics#644.0004.000
Theme#1733.4003.400
Fun#3442.9002.900

Ranked from 10 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Really nice game, love the concept and amazing that you completed this in a week!

And If you have some extra time then I would really appreciate it to check out my game.

(+1)

HEADS UP TO EVERYONE!! You need to play this game all the way through! 

I really enjoyed it. you have really added a lot of polish and gotten that feel down. Also your implementation of the theme is great! We have a similarish reveal in ours, but yours feels so much more personal!

Developer

Thank you so much o.o

I've put a lot of efforts in each specificities of the game and the fact that you have felt it, make me really enjoy ^^

Because all the game was built around the end reveal and I was not sure everyone will play all the way trough.

I was anxious about that anyone should see the end x)


Thank you for the feedback dude you're awesome. I will check out your game !

Just the way your art work and sound blend into eachother is fantastic :) 

I know that feeling, it's such a worry of "what if they miss the reveal" but I think the way you have drip fed info to the user about the cookies is enough to keep players wondering, what comes next. I also love that you can keep playing after.

Developer

Thank you, really :D

I have one last question, have you encounter any bugs or problems ? 

Because I want to continue to improve Cookie Factory after the jam, and I think there are still bugs that I have not found ^^

I hadn't come across any in my play throughs. Solid job on the bug hunt! They are a constant fear. We thought we were fairly bug free but after we submitted a friend found that if they just fly into the wall it will glitch out the physics and you can't die or kill anything...
What do you want to impove/ add?

Developer

Nice perfect then ! I have spent so much time to hunt them, mostly the end bugs wich force me to jump all the game through each time :p

Wow this is an important bug, your friend save the game literally ^^

In the first update, I will fix all the little bugs, add a second game music theme, add more cookie types. I will also review some effects, and add some of them. This is the Polish Update :D

The second update gonna be more interesting, It will contains features like a library of cookies. A big review of the dialogues, a third part dialogues and finally I want to add easter eggs. This is the Comfort Update !

(+1)

You have done a really solid job!

Unfortuneatly it was caught after submisision but that's okay, we are mid getting our non gamejam game ready for PAX so we have bigger fish to fry. 

That is a good plan, what kind of easter eggs are you considering?

Developer

Ow okay, fortunately I don't have encounter that bug ^^

You've already another jam, juste after this one ? I didn't inquire about the PAX, but it seems to be a big event :D What type of game are you making ?

I will keep the surprise :)

I am glad, it hasn't come up yet for anybody else XD

It's a longer term project, we started back in October. It's a VR party game called Operation Armstrong :) 

Developer

Wow o.o
I've check out your project, and just wow !

Sincerely I wish you the best, I'm gonna subscribe to follow the news

Submitted(+1)

Very cool game! I had trouble at first understanding which ones were good, which ones were bad (it seemed to me almost random) until I started remembering only the names. Some names seem to always go in one direction (like cats seem to always be good and dogs seem to always be bad.) Of course, the theme of the jam made me confused if I should trust what's written on the papers or not until I reached the end.

Apart from that, super cool entry! Nice audio, great graphics, good job!

If you've got some spare time, come try and rate mine! It has 7 different endings and a hilarious narrator. Worth checking out!

Developer

Thank you very much for your feedback ! I'm hopping continue to improve Cookie Factory and that's help me a lot ^^

This is literally the first game I've published, I have a lot to learn and you're not the first feeling confusing about the mechanics. So then I will do my best to make it a bit clearer to understand, either completly absurd or with an introduction more detailled.


I'me really happy you've enjoied the audios and graphics, because I'm not a soundesigner and even less designer, so thank you :D


Okay I will try yours, I don't have a lot of time, but I will do my best ^^

Submitted(+1)

Very cool and beautiful game. Although at first I didn't understand the mechanics

Developer

Thank you dude ^^
Can you explain me how for you, I can improve the tutorial ? 

Submitted

So much work ! Nice jobs ! I don't understand how you win point or when you loose but i think it's because i'm bad in testing cookie :p 

Developer

Thank you so much :D

In fact, each cookies had 3 properties, and each of them have a score. The global score of the cookie is the addition of them, and if it's greater than 50, that's a good cookie :p

Thank for your review ! I think in the next update, I will clarify that point ^^

Submitted(+1)

This game made fun =D There were a few places I had to laugh. Bad Person - Play fortnite XD

I would love it, if you can also try out my game =)

Developer

Thanks xD I'm so happy you've enjoyed it ! 

Yep I'm gonna try yours now ^^

Submitted(+4)

can you pleas make a .zip version.


check out my game: https://janjcool.itch.io/master-blaster

Developer

Alright ! That's done in a new build with some bug fixs x)

Submitted(+1)

thank you very match,

i wil now play it

Developer

Thank you too dude ^^

I'm currently playing at yours !

Submitted

Good now i now that i never going to work at a cookie factory because they are going to fire me in the first 10 min,

my highscore was 25 and end score 15.


cool game and music and graphics. 

i hope to see your name in another game jam.


check my game out: https://janjcool.itch.io/master-blaster

Developer(+1)

I'm glad you've enjoyed the game ! 

I had a resolution problem with the web version of the game so I'm currently downloading it but it's REALLY RALLY slow x)