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A jam submission

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Submitted by Allan — 23 minutes, 11 seconds before the deadline
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CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Theme#44.1604.160
Gameplay#153.6403.640
Audio#203.3203.320
Overall#293.5603.560
Visuals#553.2003.200

Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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I created all the art

Audio
I created all the sounds

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Nice done! It's more challenging than  I thought it will be! Nice visuals, cool audios, neat gameplay! Congratulations!

Submitted(+1)

Really, really awesome game! I love the main mechanic, and the aesthetic is really pleasant!
Super fun to play, amazing work!

Submitted(+1)

i very liked the graphics and the post-processing but i'm annoying that the music is repeating over and over again each time we finish a level.. 

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

A solid game, although quite slow, the post effect wasn't too glaring and the aesthetic matched pretty well. Not too overused of a concept. Although the art was pretty simple, it matched the game and music. The gameplay was a little repetitive as well as the music but Overall by itself, for the time constraints, its a pretty decent game.

Developer

Thank you so much for playing and rating the game!

Submitted(+1)

whaaa really good game ! i had a blast, lot and lot of good idea with the theme, i'm very impressed by the quality of the level design you was able to make in such a short time
I also appreciate a lottt the tutorial and level selection, it's not always well done in gamejam but when it's well done, it make all the difference
great job

Developer

thank you soooooo much!

Submitted

The game is awesome!

Developer

Thank you!

Submitted

Whoa, i really like the idea, art style and also the music and audio and the level design yes it did get more and more hard but it was still good, i gotta say i just LOVE the positive words like you rock and you did it 1 try that is so sweet i really like it =D

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much it really means alot :)

Submitted (1 edit)

This game is brutal! XD. I got stuck on the "bird" level, but it was still really fun lol. The gameplay is really solid, you did a really good job. Graphics are great, audio is good, it fits the theme. Overall just a really  solid game. The introductions of the different mechanics was fun, and although it felt unfair at times when I'd click but it wouldn't switch me, (I'm assuming it's on a timer) I still enjoyed my time. One suggestion I have is to add some sort of way to tell when you're about to switch from one area of gravity to another on the bird level. It'd help a lot.

Developer (1 edit)

your right. I should add some way of telling when you switch gravity on the bird level. But actually i wanted that level to be hard and very confusing so i didnt add a way of telling when you switch gravity.

But thanks alot for taking your time to play the game and review it. It means alot 

Submitted

I am committed to finishing games when I start them, but damn 119 tries, that is sorta indicative of intuitive design as others have pointed out. Good audio, loved the post processing.

For the last level I put a sticky note on my monitor because of how annoying it was to have to switch quickly, but I'm sure that's been pointed out to you. Great take on the theme, regardless of some small issues.


Developer

hahahah i cant believe you actually kept going until 119 tries! Thank you so much for playing the game and yes im aware of some issues. 

But did you complete the last level? Because when i made it a had like 10 minutes so i wasnt able to test it out and to see if i actually could complete the level or of it is impossible 

Submitted

I did not finish the game but returned to the level select and realized it said "impossible", I just assumed that it wasn't meant to be completed. I gave that one quite a few tries as well, thought I could get it.

Developer

hahaha anyway thanks again for playing the game

Submitted

The graphics are amazing and so is the gameplay!

Developer(+1)

thank you so much!

Submitted

Good job :D

Unique graphics and gameplay

Developer

thank you!

Submitted

I love that you add a unique game mechanic for each level!

Developer

Thank you!

Submitted

Love the game!! Great job :D

Developer

Thanks!

Submitted

I love the fleshing out of the main idea, the post processing, and the level idea switching. Keep up the good work!

Submitted

Great game and concept. At the training level, you should also mention the controls. And the thumbnail shows less of the game.

Developer

I agree, i am going to adhd that as soon as possible 

Submitted

Great idea, but the switch cool down is a great idea and needed. 

Also, the level with no platforms and inverted gravity is not intuitive- some visual indicator of when you are switching gravity fields is necessary.

The platform level also needs some visual indicators of waypoints for the platforms and some land markers so the player knows they are moving (if all are moving the same direction at the same rate, looks like you are standing still)

Finally, the last level has some bug working to do. Sometimes the platforms fell at different speeds. Also, I would switch when near the close wall, but my guy would sometimes switch to the middle of the other side instead. It certainly is a tough level!


Cool game, keep up the good work!

Developer(+1)

I totally agree with you feedback and ill fix that as soon as I have the chance. Thanks for playing my game!

Submitted(+2)

cool game, the switching cooldown is fine, but an indicator of when you can switch would help.

Developer

oh damn your right, thats a great idea

Submitted

good pixel art and nice game.

Developer

thanks!

Submitted

love that good pixel arts and gameplay <3

Developer

thank you