1) No screenshots. It gives the impression you don't really care and if you don't - why should I? Doesn't take too much effort to add a few screenshots to your game page. You're trying to make me want to play your game. I want to see what it looks like before I play.
2) Poor English. You should consider asking for help on the forum and get someone to translate for you (or at least clean up the grammar/spelling).
3) It's not particularly interesting (to me). This is somewhat subjective but I got bored after about 15 minutes. I do like some of the mechanics like rolling the dice, the transitions between the board and when you're in a fight etc.
4) "But I promise that around next year I will release full version."
so... you're not going to work on this one? at all? The game you just uploaded that has literally one level? I get the impression you're not that invested in your game and, again, if you don't care - why should I? There's a pretty low barrier to entry when it comes to publishing a game and you are competing against every other developer. This means that you need to find a way to capture people's attention (screenshots, updates, etc).
Here's a better translation of your game page if you want to use it.
The remake of Quest of magic : Millenus's greed.
This is based on a story from a paper game I played as a child.
Because it's a demo there is only 1 playable floor with unique skill cards, rare treasures to collect and basic battle mechanics.
I plan on releasing a full version next year after I put together a team to develop the game.
My goal is to make this game for Android and sell it for $1-$2.
If you like my game and want to support my work please consider donating $1.