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1) No screenshots. It gives the impression you don't really care and if you don't - why should I? Doesn't take too much effort to add a few screenshots to your game page. You're trying to make me want to play your game. I want to see what it looks like before I play.

2) Poor English. You should consider asking for help on the forum  and get someone to translate for you (or at least clean up the grammar/spelling). 

3) It's not particularly interesting (to me). This is somewhat subjective but I got bored after about 15 minutes. I do like some of the mechanics like rolling the dice, the transitions between the board and when you're in a fight etc. 

4) "But I promise that around  next year I will release full version."

so... you're not going to work on this one?  at all? The game you just uploaded that has literally one level? I get the impression you're not that invested in your game and, again, if you don't care - why should I? There's a pretty low barrier to entry when it comes to publishing a game and you are competing against every other developer. This means that you need to find a way to capture people's attention  (screenshots, updates, etc).

Here's a better translation of your game page if you want to use it.

The remake of Quest of magic : Millenus's  greed.

This is based on a story from a paper game I played as a child.
Because it's a demo there is only 1 playable  floor with unique skill cards, rare treasures to collect and basic battle mechanics.
I plan on releasing a full version next year after I put together a team to develop the game.
My goal is to make this game for Android  and sell it for $1-$2.

If you like my game and want to support my work please consider donating $1.

Thank you for your recommend. but I have something to tell you, I don't want to misunderstand to me.

1) I made screenshorts for my every game.but when I set game for play on browser, nobody see my screenshort.I try to make video this time.

2) I'll try by myself first, because i use to asking for help in many forum (in Thailand) but they won't answer. I paid 10$ for hire translator to translate in my game .but I'll try another way.

3)thanks for play game

4) I have 2-3 hour per day  to use computer to make game. This project start at February until now I just made one level.  I know it look like argue but I have daily job and study Theological Education by Extension (TEE) in Christian collage for church ministry, so this game maybe last project and first chance to sell game.

I copy your translation to my game page now, thanks again.

It took me a while to find this myself, but you can enable screenshots for browser  games too.