That was two stories for the price of one! Great Job!
This! I love the depth you've given them!
Boom Boom Boom!
That was great! Keep up the good work!
I liked this!
I thought your format was excellent. I also really liked your usage of the word salvoes. I don't hear it often.
That was such a cool character!
This was really fun to read!
That was Amazing! You told a great story while excellently weaving the central theme throughout. That was a pleasure to read.
I loved this! You gave so much character to the saurians.
That was great!
Good story! I had a bit of a hard time following the narrative. though.
