Great art. Awesome map. Cool setting. 

Good job.

Isometric map FTW! I love how clear and concise the information in the adventure. Great use of layout. I appreciate the addition of Timeline of Events and Rumors. I can see this as something that I would run for Mausritter! One of my favorite entries! 5 Stars!

Brilliant & beautiful.  Dig the map & colors.  Jerusalem crickets & roly-pollies rule.  Nuclear waste, but with taste.

Absolutely lovely. Artwork is great, really nice map, interesting range of opponents and hazards. Nice work.

I really enjoyed the presentation of this micro adventure. The layout as others have mentioned is superb. The area key and map in the main spread makes it incredibly usable and easy to pick up. This and Mausritter feel synonymous. This is a great little adventure!

Everyone else has mentioned the organization and presentation, so I'll highlight this: I like the ecosystem that can be sustained by the poison eating mites. A follow up adventure could easily be to move the wounding stone to somewhere safe while managing poison-counteracting infestation.

Organized well and an excellent map. The simple premise works well, clear villains and objective, I think this adventure is well done! Easy to drop into a game. 

Very cool premise for a short adventure, Crickets as BBEG! ManaDawn knocks it out of the park yet again!

A really useful adventure site, just what I needed to slot into a current campaign. Nice one

Really cool spin on the title. The layout is clean and the cover is very evocative! (great map!!)

Clean layout, making it very easy to parse all of the information. I can easily imagine a whole collection of adventures in this format. That would be a fun collection indeed.

our group has just recently gotten into playing Mausritter and this will be so fun to play! especially interested in the prize of a Rhino beetle companion lol. Love the layout/color choices as well!

Amazing layout! Great work!