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A jam submission

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Submitted by Jonty Guite — 2 hours, 52 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Audio#43.9094.100
Visuals#103.6233.800
How much do you enjoy the game overall?#192.9563.100
How well does the game fit the themes?#193.8144.000
Overall#213.2423.400
Gameplay#232.5742.700
Did you make it in 3 hours (put 5 by default)#292.5742.700

Ranked from 10 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How long was your dev time?
5 hours

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

I'm curious to see what you could make with more time! I enjoy it a lot! Excellent Entry! Good job!

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much! :)

Yeah, there was a lot of features I kinda scrapped which I hope to put in later. I'm glad you like it. :D

Submitted(+1)

Pretty cool - I always love it when someone comes up with some kind of story for jam games. The voice over is really well done. 

The game itself works fine and fits the theme. Just add some polishing, maybe an added challenge and I think its good to go :)

Developer(+1)

Yeah, found that parallax and some challenge was sorely needed. Definitely working on that next.

Thanks a lot! :D

(+1)

Wow very well done. Great art and audio. very impressive for such a short period of time. I really liked the sound the audio clips, reminded me a lot of bioshock infinite with the voxophones. The game really feels like being in space to me.  Great job!

Developer

Thanks a bunch! Glad you liked it. :) ..and oh damn, during recording I knew I'd taken some cues from somewhere but couldn't tell from where. Now I know, haha!

Submitted(+1)

Wow! Totally unexpected. At first I didn't like that there where no movement feeling, also thought that the player was too slow. And then the monologue started.

Very well executed! Add a parallax and some particles to the astronaut's propulsor and the game should be ready to be a nice and polished experience.

By the way, the soundtrack and monologue are yours or you took them from some place. In case it is the second, can I please have an URL to them?

Thank you and keep going!

Developer

Thanks a bunch! I'm glad you like it!

Yeah, parallax and some juicing are definitely up next on the list of stuff to add, haha.

The monolgues are by yours truly and the soundtrack was created using BeepBox by the same. No urls, sorry.

Thanks again! :)

Submitted(+1)

Wow, this is ambitious for a 3-hour jam! I loved the monologue. I was worried at first about whether or not I would remember what the ship looked liked at the beginning so I could recreate it, but thankfully, it doesn't matter what pieces you put where- which I think is actually a pretty clever tie-in to the message of the monologue.

Developer

Hey, thanks a bunch! :D

Really glad you like the game and that the message came through. :)

Submitted(+1)

Mystic game with a very good art but a lack of challenge.

When you are coming back from grabbing a piece, you lose the sense of movement (you don’t see that you are actually moving). A parallax effect could help.

Music would help in the mood.

Developer(+1)

Thanks for playing. :)

Yeah.. parallax was sorely needed but kinda ran out of time. Also maybe it was muffled by the voice lines but there was music in the game though it was dynamic. It grows louder and louder as you complete the ship. I hope it wasn't a bug.

Submitted(+1)

I love how deep it got so fast. This astronaut is very introspective and we ended with the ship of theseus. Nice story and conversation

Developer(+1)

Oh wow.. now that you mention it, the ship of Theseus is exactly what it is, haha! 

Thanks for playing. I'm glad you liked the game! :D

Submitted(+1)

Please add more description to what you need to do or how to play the game.

Developer

Okay. Will do. Thanks for playing. :)