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A jam entry

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A small, interactive dual poetry, music and art piece. ***Please play in full-screen in your browser***
Submitted by antstiller with 19 hours, 7 minutes before the deadline

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw score
Polish#53.6253.625
Staying true to the source material#54.0004.000
Graphics#74.0004.000
Overall#83.5003.500
Sound#83.5003.500
Most innovative use of the source material#103.2503.250
Fun#152.6252.625

Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Comments

Jupiter_Hadley · 1 year ago

Simply beautiful. I included it in part 2 of my Public Domain Jam 2 compilation video series, if you would like to check it out :) https://youtu.be/Zm3F461UAZo

What a fascinating entry. The poems worked together quite well (though I confess I didn't understand that they were separate poems until after I'd finished it). They told something of a cohesive story, if melancholy and wistful. The art was very nice as well, and the music added to the atmosphere but was not intrusive.

Looks and sounds beautiful. Good one to relax with.

:) This piece made me smile. Thank you.

I'm a fan of this, the artwork is interesting and the music compliments it well, and I like how you need to explore to figure out exactly how to proceed. Very cute little experience :)

That was rather weird. I'm not a fan of the font, personally, but I'll probably still be thinking slightly about this game as I go to bed tonight.

Just replied to your comment on my game page!

Thanks for your feeback, Norbez. Much appreciated.

This was a bit of an experiment with several things, including the layout. I've updated the instructions a bit so it's clearer to set the browser to full screen.

I saw your game there in the jam! Will check it out and leave feedback a little later.

Just saw the download instruction to play this game fullscreen; sorry, I missed that entirely. :(

Anyway, gave it a play through, and- my gosh, this is wonderful. The art is just beautiful, every element of it. The music is minimalist, but super effective. The font is also great, but a little hard to read at times. And I found the hidden credits. :)

(also in this jam, with HummingBird Haunting. Check it out? I'm eager to see people's thoughts! http://norbez.itch.io/hummingbird-haunting

Hey, I remember you from the Twiny Jam! Whisper was a great game. I'm also in this jam, with my game HummingBird Haunting!

Anyway, downloaded this successfully, and I clicked until I got to the white star . . . but when I click the white star itself, nothing happens. Is this a glitch, or is there something I'm not seeing? I look forward to enjoying your game!

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