I'm guessing you guys have fixed the text-skipping issue on clicking that a few other commenters mentioned because it didn't happen during my playthrough :3 Though the loading of new lines of text was sometimes a little bit delayed.

I think the visual style is really cool :3 I love the art throughout! 

I really wanted to like this game but I'm sorry to admit I struggled a little bit. The UI has a lot of issues, especially the fact that clicking even a smidge before the dialogue is finished immediately launches the next line, or the fact that it's sometimes very ambiguous and unclear what you're meant to do or what you want to click on (but you're a bit afraid to click on stuff randomly because you don't want to skip another dialogue)!
I also had some (albeit smaller) issues with the writing, which felt a little too edgy at times - I'm totally okay with the harder, grittier stuff but there were points where it felt a little bit forced, at least for my personal taste.
That being said, there's obviously great potential in this project, and it shows in things like the ambitious opening sequence and the great music - I commend you for using Unity to make a VN, which is really tremendously harder and more finnicky than Ren'Py (or even Godot for that matter, which I used for my own entry), and I'm sure that should you decide to keep working on this project and polishing it, you'd have a very qualitative and unique product to show for it at the end of the road.

Looks good, need some QoL changes but I really dig the music and the arts.

I want to read this but the system is not very convenient-see my full feedback on the page