resend. please check

I sent you email on September, 4th in my timezone. Has it not delivered yet?

Sent you an email, and thanks before!

Hello, can I contact you via email so I can send the script?

Naah, no problem for me. My schedule for release still on next month anyway, so if you could proofread 10k words in about 2 weeks it's alright too. Sent you an email, please check

Great! How could I contact you? I'll send the script right away

Hi,  I'm looking for a proofreader for my upcoming visual novel : ALLBLACK Chapter 5

Previous chapter, if you'd like to see

Requirement: 

• Have good understanding of grammar and can proofread, of course
• Native speaker of English is preferable, although not necessary.
• If you can directly edit on script.rpy it's a good point otherwise I'm fine with you editing it on Ms.Word
• Length : about 10k words
• Deadline : scheduled to release next month (end September) so it's still pretty far away. But  I expected 2 weeks is enough

Since this is a free project I'll be honest I can't give you a sum of cash but feel free to ask me a simple chibi commissions (terms applied)

Looking forward for your contribution!

The journey of "Theodore Quentin" continues...

"Trusting, that is the problem - to be or not to be?"

Finally after around 1 month of development , I proudly present ALLBLACK Chapter 4!

This visual novel is a direct continuation of Chapter 3 published before, so make sure to read Chapter 1, 2 and 3  first so you don't get confused ;)

>>> DOWNLOAD LINK CHAPTER 4 <<<

>>> ALLBLACK on STEAM! Released Q1 2020 <<<

DETAILS

• Format : Kinetic Novel
• Genre : Action, psychological, sci-fi
• Length : 10k words, about 30-40 minutes reading
• Language : English
• Platform : PC (Windows, Mac, Linux) and Android (5 and up)

TEAM

• Original story : fsc
• VN Adaptation : TNR 
• Editor and Proofreader : nim

Please leave a feedback and don't forget to wishlist on Steam if you like it ;)

If I'm not reading it wrong, once you sell about 100.000 USD you will get back the 100 USD deposit, but I'm not sure since I haven't experienced it beforehand. For views though, I kinda hope that my first project will get enough exposure and feedback by entering it into Steam, or am I hoping too much?

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the story as well.

Hi, are you fine with visual novel? Would be appreciated if you could review mine

https://nsaid.itch.io/allblack-ch1

I'm a mainly a freelance illustrator working with a small team to finish this visual novel https://nsaid.itch.io/allblack-ch1

We are progressing into chapter 4, but the exposure here is not what we expected (we just like, getting 250 downloads and no useful review for this past 3 months) , so I'm thinking, is it worth to reach larger audience by posting it on Steam? We have to think about this thoroughly because register fee on Steam is quite an amount for us (100 USD). But if it means reaching 100x, or hopefully more audience then it'd be fine for us, because our first target is to promote this visual novel as much as possible. And getting useful feedback for our next project, of course.

Would love to see your opinion in this

Now that Ren'Py latest version has supported web app, ALLBLACK can now be played directly on your browser.

Tested and work normally on Chrome browser ver. 75.0.3770.90 (Official Build) (64-bit).

Notice that this feature is still on beta phase so we highly recommend to download and install in conventional way, but feel free to try the web version and give feedbacks for future improvements.

DETAILS

• Format : Kinetic Novel
• Genre : Action, psychological, sci-fi
• Length : 10k words/chapter, about 30-40 minutes reading/chapter
• Language : English, Japanese (only in Chapter 1)

TEAM

• Original story : fsc
• VN Adaptation : TNR 

LINK

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Hi, I leave some feedback on LSF. It'd be cool if you check mine too :)

Sent! Please confirm. Thank you

Great! How could I contact you? Via email?

Hi, since my previous proofreader is currently unable to provide support, I'm looking for a proofreader for my upcoming visual novel : ALLBLACK Chapter 4

Previous chapter, if you'd like to see

Requirement: 

• Have good understanding of grammar and can proofread, of course
• Native speaker of English is preferable, although not necessary.
• If you can directly edit on script.rpy it's a good point otherwise I'm fine with you editing it on Ms.Word
• Length : about 10k words
• Deadline : scheduled to release next month so it's still pretty far away. But  I expected 2 weeks is enough

Since this is a free project I'll be honest I can't give you a sum of cash but feel free to ask me a simple chibi commissions (terms applied)

Looking forward for your contribution!

The journey of "Theodore Quentin" continues...who is Vicky? Is she related to the girl who haunts his dream recently? Will she be the key to uncover his past?

Finally after around 2 weeks of development, I proudly present ALLBLACK Chapter 3!

This visual novel is a direct continuation of Chapter 2 published before, so make sure to read Chapter 1 and 2  first so you don't get confused ;)

DETAILS

• Format : Kinetic Novel
• Genre : Action, psychological, sci-fi
• Length : 10k words, about 30-40 minutes reading
• Language : English
• Platform : PC (Windows, Mac, Linux) and Android (4.4 and up)

TEAM

• Original story : fsc
• VN Adaptation : TNR 
• Editor and Proofreader : S.B Hunter, David Pardy

DOWNLOAD CHAPTER 3 HERE

PREVIOUS CHAPTER : CHAPTER 2

PREVIOUS CHAPTER : CHAPTER 1

Sent you an email! Thanks for the fast response.

Great! How can I get through you? Via email maybe?

Hi, since my previous proofreader is currently unable to provide support, I'm looking for a proofreader for my upcoming visual novel : ALLBLACK Chapter 3

Previous chapter, if you'd like to see

Requirement: 

• Have good understanding of grammar and can proofread, of course
• Native speaker of English is preferable, although not necessary.
• If you can directly edit on script.rpy it's a good point otherwise I'm fine with you editing it on Ms.Word
• Length : about 10k words
• Deadline : about 1 week

Since this is a free project I'll be honest I can't give you a sum of cash but feel free to ask me a simple chibi commissions (terms applied)

Looking forward for your contribution!

Thank you. Looking forward to your feedback! :D

The journey of "Theodore Quentin" continues...will he finally find a truth behind his identity? 

Finally after around 2 weeks of development, I proudly present ALLBLACK Chapter 2!

This visual novel is a direct continuation of Chapter 1 published before, so make sure to read Chapter 1 first so you don't get confused ;)

DETAILS

• Format : Kinetic Novel
• Genre : Action, psychological, sci-fi
• Length : 10k words, about 30-40 minutes reading
• Language : English
• Platform : PC (Windows, Mac, Linux) and Android (4.4 and up)

TEAM

• Original story : fsc
• VN Adaptation : TNR 
• Editor and Proofreader : S.B Hunter

DOWNLOAD CHAPTER 2 HERE

PREVIOUS CHAPTER : CHAPTER 1

Ah...how nostalgic...i hope to see your visual novel again in the future!

JAPANESE TRANSLATION ver 1.0 ADDED 

Format : Visual Novel

Length : 10k words

Platform : PC (Windows, Mac, Linux) and Android (4.4+)

Language supported : English and Japanese

Synopsis : A man wake up with no memories, and seemingly holding a key for secret project. This is his journey to find his missing identity, and to escape from the people who wants him back at all cost.

Full details and download link here

Additional chapters will be added in the future (there will be 6 chapters total in Phase 1)

Don't be afraid to leave your feedback here guys :)

By the way, is everything going okay on every platform? I mean, I haven't tested on Linux, Mac and Chromebook so if there's no complaint I'll assume the game is working properly HAHAHA

LOL I laughed so hard just looking at the screenshot

Ah, never mind then. It's because my script.rpy doesn't contain any strings so it's not translated. I figured it just now hahaha.

Hi. I'm still learning how to generate translation too. Why my script.rpy file is not translated by the way? I'm rather confused since I put all the definition here (like character name, transition effect and such). I have to change the character name into the language I translated. Is there any way to override this?

I'm back with new project. Hopefully I don't drop this one =w=

Let's support each other X3

Glad you're still working on this! I've been absent on VN community like....5 years? And I'm glad you're still being productive! Keep up the good work, I'm waiting for the final product ^o^

I love the game, I even use your GUI as a benchmark for my visual novel lol. Keep up the good work!

Hi, my nickname is TNR. I'm mainly just hobbyist/freelance illustrator, but hoping to make a progress with Visual Novel lately. 

My first visual novel project is made with Ren'Py software. There are still a lot to learn so any feedback is greatly appreciated!

Here is my first VN published here, ALLBLACK Ch.1 (genre: action, psychological, sci-fi. length: 10k words)

ALLBLACK Chapter 1

Finally, after about 1 month of development, ALLBLACK Visual Novel chapter 1 is released!

This visual novel adapts published light novel with the same title

Platform : PC (Windows) and Android (4.4+)

Synopsis : A man wake up with no memories, and seemingly holding a key for secret project. This is his journey to find his missing identity, and to escape from the people who wants him back at all cost.

Full details and download link here

Additional chapters and port will be added in the future.