I see you finished this! Congrats saitoki.

"Have you ever heard a myth about cafes that turn back time?”

Follow the story of our protagonist, Mina, in her struggle to move on from the past that haunts her since these past two years. She lost someone dear to her, and blame herself for it. And now, two days before Valentine's Day, she meets Taku, a waiter who introduced her to a cafe named EDDA. Dragged by her little curiosity and her friend's compulsion, she finds out that through magic in that cafe, she was given a second chance. 

Will it save her heart? Will she move forward or stay in the past?

“And when the coffee starts to drip, the magic begins...”

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EDDA Café is a visual novel made by Mushroomallow Studio

• Format: Visual Novel 
• Genre: Slice of life, fantasy, romance
• Length: 8000 words
• Language: English
• Platform: PC (Windows, Mac, Linux), Android

Looking forward to your feedback!

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I adore the artsyle, even though I'm neutral with GxG, it's so fluffy <3

Sent you a friend request!

Sent you a friend request!

Looking for proofreader/editor for the second part of ALLBLACK Phase 2

Unpaid work, able to finish it around 3 months for10.000 words, familiar with review function in Ms.Word is all you need.

Warning: The script is written by non English native speaker so expect a lot of mistakes that need to be addressed.

Right, so it is almost end of March. Can't wait :D

After releasing Phase 1 worldwide on December 2020, now it's time to move on to the next phase! Are you excited?

This visual novel is the direct continuation of the prequel, ALLBLACK Phase 1. It is recommended to read the first to understand the context better.

As soon as I'm free for any other jam, I decided to push this project to be released on March (along with NaNoReNo 2021 event). At first I planned it will cover Chapter 7, but unfortunately there are so many assets that have to be drawn within the timeframe, so I decided to cut into half. Rest assured that the continuation will be released soon. My target is somewhere around May 2021 for Chapter 7, and around Q1 2023 for the rest of Phase 2.

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As always, any feedback is appreciated!

wow it's gorgeous to have it hand drawn :o

I hope everything will be alright. I bought your game on steam, cause I know small indie developer is very tight on budget, and I can relate :')

yoo good luck!

There is some similar vibe to my visual novel, ALLBLACK, if you look at my profile. Do check it out if you're interested

Haha from the screenshot alone I can guess this will be hilarious XD

I take a look of the script inside the game folder and dissappointed that I can't cheat by knowing the story in advance 😂 anyway good luck with the VN!

I find the demo is pretty intriguing, Farkas somehow reminds me of my MC lol. When will the final game released and at what price?

Thank you for the compliment. We did our best to deliver. Please looking forward to the continuation

I just read the story and find pretty intriguing, when will you plan to release the full version?

As a ratslayer at work I can't accept this...

Thank you for your compliment! We did our best and glad to be able to deliver it. Please looking forward to final product

Thank you for your compliment! We did our best and glad to be able to deliver it.

Thank you for taking your time answering my question!

1. Glad you enjoyed it! I was being critiqued the writing is unnecessary long though, and I hope I can fix that in later release.

2. Glad you also like it. I plan to upgrade the character sprites in next release, I hope it'll be better than this one. Background will generally stay the same (from free resources as I can't afford BG artist)

3. No, this is a kinetic/linear novel. There is no choices. I only adapt the existing story as it is. But maybe we could make another spin-off based on "what-if" scenario, if the readers would like to see that ^^

4. Stay tuned! The next phase (chapter 7 to be specific) planned to release this April. I'll do my best to finish it. Check my updates on Twitter!

Also thanks for compliment about music box! I don't really have a good taste on music, so I'm relieved if someone says it's matched.

I just read the story. It's ok, I mean- it's relatable to some extent. But the conclusion is a bit eh. I guess it depends on the readers how to interpret that, but I'm a bit disappointed since the build up is so good but after that it feels so short. I understand due to the limitation of time your team might not be able to make a longer one. Also you might need a proofreader because I spot quite a lot mistakes, typo and grammar-wise. Still I appreciate for your first VN, this is pretty good. The main menu video is cool too.

The art is fantastic. Will be waiting for the full release!

In my opinion you just cant push people to buy your visual novel (or any kind of game) without "branding" them first (i.e: let people know about your product). This can't be done in one night, obviously. You need to plan it carefully with long-term marketing strategy. Your product does not look appealing for most of visual novel fans (I speak here because from my experience, general visual novel fans looking for something more visually appealing like nice graphic and characters, and maybe some fanservice, before anything else). I know that several visual novels sold deviates from that pattern, but it's very, very little example and it's hard to expect that from relatively unknown creator. Take a look of the example of popular visual novel and why it's sold well, and maybe you can think from that.

Short game that can be finished in 20 minutes. I'm curious about Ulima's origin now XD

"Have you ever heard a myth about cafes that turn back time?”

Mina is a shy girl who lost her dearest one. Guilt, regret, and sadness haunt her after that accident, causing her to blame herself. Two years has passed and she's still trapped in her past. Two days before Valentine’s day, she meets Taku, a waiter who introduced her to a cafe named EDDA. Dragged by her little curiosity and her friend's compulsion, she finds out that through magic in that cafe, she was given a second chance. Will it save her heart? Will she move forward or stay in the past?

“And when the coffee starts to drip, the magic begins...”

A submission for Valentine Visual Novel Jam 2021

Characters:

Format: Visual Novel

Platform: PC and Android

Link to the Game

Enjoy it with cookies and hot milk/coffee

Can't wait to the full game. The visual looks nice so far!

Hey there, I'd be happy to translate to Indonesian if you don't mind. Have you heard that it has a short film adaptation by Indonesia studio too?

Oh, that's wonderful if you can access inter platform with single purchase. I'll be keeping an eye when another sales open, right now it is outside my budget indeed :')

The full version price seems a bit steep for its word count. If it's like less than or around 10 USD perhaps I'd consider to buy :)

Let's discuss on Discord for more details. My ID is MadScientist#4886

Are you still interested on finding UI artist?

Hello everyone! If you are good/native Brazilian Portuguese and love visual novel/story rich game, I'd like to ask you to contribute as a translator on my visual novel~

Link: https://nsaid.itch.io/allblack-phase-1

This visual (kinetic) novel consists of 6 chapters (about 60.000 words in total). The previous translator has finished 2 chapters, still 4 chapters left. You are free to do this on your own pace, I don't have strict deadlines, just give me an estimate how long you'll be finished :)

Feel free to reach me on Discord: MadScientist#4886 or email tiya.novlita@gmail.com

Hello thanks for your offering! Will contact you through Discord

Oh my God that's really A LOT. Will the final product be free or paid? Either way good luck!

Hi! You're welcome. How should I contact you? Discord or email will be fine.

Ohhh nice I'll be waiting for it

Sure! How can I contact you to give the file? Email or discord is fine!

How much words will the full version have? Will it be free or paid?