I know it's unfinished, but there's an amusing sense of humor to the narrator's sense of disinterested detachment as you enter the endgame and die. "Yeah, you're in a freezer. Smart move. / No, you die / people find your frozen corpse in the morning" made me crack up. It's also a good Twine project that has some choices to stop it being too linear, a neat rhyming structure, and an original horror setting. Good job on this one!

This was a great little interactive adventure!! I used to work at a store, so this felt too real hahaha!! The different text options were fun to choose too, I liked the go back feature, not one I usually see! Overall great job!! I hope you can finish it in the future!

As someone who works in a grocery store, this just is too real. The real horror is the creeping crawling things during the holiday season! The rhymes were perfect and I was especially impressed as the real horror started happening but remained "in character" so to speak. This was a really fun jaunt but I was disappointed that even as the monster attacked me and my life was ending that I didn't have customers asking where things were in the store or what the price was on something.

I got through to some parts that were obviously not yet finished, but I can't wait to see what fun happens there.

Not only the rhymes aspect, but the whole writing structure is greatly done.  As the writing is the main thing here and it's so good, the simple style and the errors didn't make me enjoy it any less. Congratulations!