Nice job! I agree with the others about the visuals - they definitely add to the atmosphere of the game, plus the slightly janky low-poly style definitely makes the game feel more uncanny and spooky.

The second half of the game felt really interesting, aesthetically - it felt like the player character had stumbled into a different world, which felt unnerving.

It'd be great to see this expanded - I want to know more about the world! It was slightly frustrating having to restart from the beginning each time, but you let the player skip through quickly, so it wasn't a huge problem. The ending where you stay in the lighthouse was a cool idea, and I think it would've been great with a slightly slower pace. 

Overall this was really cool - I think there's something inherently creepy about CYOA games, and you definitely ramped the creepiness factor up to 11. Well done!

(the captcha told me to select all images with bridges when I was submitting this... too soon 😨)

I love a classic CYOA! The imagery and sound effects really added to the experience. It wasn't terribly long, but you also worked in several endings and branches, so that's understandable. I particularly loved the line about it listening for sounds and not words.

I love the visuals, reminiscent of ps1 silent hill. The sfx are a nice a touch and everything sets the mood well. I did enjoy the trial and error of figuring out what kills you. Also the ocean death scene was beautiful.

Nice game! The minimalist visuals and audio gave the game a creepy mood. Good work!

I really enjoyed the visuals in this game and just would love too see more to the game. Good game !

I really liked the visual style of this game! It sort of reminded me of Myst? Also the sound work was wonderful, and put me on edge (in a good way).  

I would work on having a consistent tense for the narrator, as it shifted quite a bit. Here is an example:

"After a short walk down the road you come across the old bridge, it's schedule to be demolished next month but it should be fine to cross since your not in a car."

I would make all of this past tense / clean it up a little bit like so: 

After a short walk down the road, you came across the old bridge, which is scheduled to be demolished next month. But it should be fine to cross by foot. 

I think there were a few places where you flipped between ending with a period and ending without. I would try and be consistent.

Enjoyed my playthrough and thank you for sharing! 

I like the visual style, would have loved to see this fleshed out more!

I like the sound effects and story!