From the tweet and pitch I can tell what to expect from the game, which I like. A lot of your trailer footage is similar to other stops so I think you could trim several scenes out without losing any part of your key message.
Play game
Temple Hunters's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall Pitch Quality | #8 | 3.733 | 3.733 |
| Engagement | #8 | 3.600 | 3.600 |
| Clarity | #10 | 3.467 | 3.467 |
| Unique Selling Point | #19 | 3.200 | 3.200 |
Ranked from 15 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.
- Tweet is good and the game looks great! You've ticked the boxes for suggested content and you've published a great game! Tweet Suggestions: -- Need a Call to Action with Steam page link (your primary focus). -- You can embed the link to your Steam page in your Trailer using Twitter Ad Cards. Jump on our Discord to find out how. Press Kit: -- Great start. Flesh out some details and will be even better. -- Recent grads can add in things like your game dev degree, university, big companies you may have worked on games for, even as a student -- Redesign the front pages to match your own look and feel in the back. (The plain template is just for ease of sharing.) -- Price: Commas are European punctuation not English.. It's 10.99 not 10,99 -- Status: Early Access (Remove "In Development" as that implies it's not released)
- Cut straight to the action in your trailer and break up your text with emojis and line breaks!
- I doff my cap to you! I absolutely loved it- the Tomb Raider / Indiana Jones likeness is there but I still am along for the ride! I think the only question I have is will there be a story? Because I'd really enjoy that even more than I already do.
- Press Kit and Itch Page are well put together Really like the game idea and concept Tweet needs more word spacing Maybe less mentioning of puzzles unless puzzles are a core concept to the game - and if so - then i want to know more about that
- The pitch video is mostly driving instead of hunting but I do like it!
PitchYaPitch Tweet
https://twitter.com/Niels_Dev/status/1451595624336527370
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/11fd-BMw30WPoqsk-OTpSXmDEg381_nQG-TGrvgT5F88/edit?usp=sharing
Itch.io Game URL (DevLog Update)
https://nielsdev.itch.io/temple-hunters
Linktree URL (DevLog Update)
https://linktr.ee/NielsDev
Leave a comment
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.