Love the cheeky text! Agree with other comments that a trailer would really bring a lot to this pitch - and would probably be really satisfying to watch!

It is very clear what the game is based on tweet and press kit. I agree with others that a video would help potential players understand how the game is unique and if they'd be interested. Thanks for sharing!

Suggested Tweet Edit:

Glass Smashing has never been so satisfying with this addictive and free mobile game!

No more scolding from your mom, no matter how many you smash!🤣🤣

Get smashing!

Apple -- https://apps.apple.com/us/app/glass-smashing/id1575711422

Android -- https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.ftpl.GyanGames_GS

#PitchYaPitch #mobileapps #mobilegame

[Include Gameplay Video uploaded directly to Twitter]

Press Kit and tweet are very clear. You could use a better attachment on the tweet (such as your screenshots or video) rather than just the preview to the store page.

Can't access the press kit is it public?

+ Rebellious
+ Out of the box
+ Seems to be quite a hell of a time.

- I wish I could say it's crystal clear and transparent, but yeah a video would have gotten you there.

Since the pitch in pitchyagame event is the tweet, the video would help the game out a lot being in the tweet, and not just a picture.

Could use a video or gif of the gameplay to give the viewer a reason to press the store link.

really liked it! 😁