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I like the lore and the platforming. I would love to see some different dangers or enemies. Nice game.

I like the theme and lore of the game. Just a note: When approaching a wall, you cannot jump, forcing the player to continue. But for the rest it seems to me a quite interesting game that takes good advantage of the theme of minimalism.

It's a nice game. I like the gameplay and the lore at the beginning. My only complaint is that when you get close to a wall or a platform you can't jump and that kind of annoys me and like others, I didn't know what to do once I started playing. Other than that, it's fun. Great job!

The amount of lore at the start was unbearably long. I couldn't read everything, it was too much.
I didn't know what to do in the game. If I was doing good or bad, if I had to collect bolts or killing blue lines. It was a bit confusing for me :/

Interesting storyline. Nice animation when character is dead. Good job!

Nice! 

I think that being able to control other elements in the level (besides the main character) could be the mechs that make this game unique together with the storyline and the lore. The lore gives me mysterious and philosophical vibes, that I liked! Obviously, as you wrote on the project page, there is some work/polishing/expansion to do but you are on a good start, and having already a solid lore/storyline as foundations is great!

Interesting game! I hope you keep working on this. I'd definitely like to see where it goes. 

Really interesting game. I'm super impressed by the size of the map. It's a lot of work to line up challenging platforming, exploration and puzzles and this did a good job at that. Unique theme too!

great game with an excellent story line!

I am a big fiction guy so I really liked the story. A few things:

1.  We can agree that the is game in prototype stages, but having more information on what to do would really help. I started playing the game, but I didn't really know what to do? Like am I supposed to collect the electro things, how am I supposed to use the other creature that I can control? Should I follow it, should I interact with it, should I use it to jump and all. So I believe answering those questions in the beginning would help new people like me understand what to do in the game better.
2. The jumping did feel janky but I am sure you guys will improve it as you keep developing the game.

Really looking forward to the lore of the game. Keep up the good work.

Cool story-telling in this game & interesting concept. Great work!

I wish you guys a good luck and yes, keep working on the project. Next time you should really add volume control, also the intro text crawl was too much... shorten a bit. Good job.

I liked how you can move the enemies, that's a cool concept! The lore behind the game was interesting as well, it was great that you still managed to add in a back story given the short nature of the jam. Well done!

Given the timeframe, i think you did a good job. I know you’re aware of some of the bugs but i really didn’t like the screen flash. I think you should add a warning about flashing lights.

I’ll be honest with you, i don’t like to read so i would have liked to skip the intro or have it shortened.

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I find the gameplay is solid if there wasn't so many bugs in it, i get stuck in walls and floors easily  and i don't even know what i'm doing, the idea is cool though.

Cool concept, interested to see where this goes.

Most of my feed back had been covered very well below. I did have a good time once I got into the game. The topic you have chosen is a complex one that offers so much room to create in so I will keep my eye on this and hope you continue to work on it. 

The starting cutscene is very  slow  (for a jam) but I like the mechanic that you can move enemies

The art is beautiful and the sound is really good! The starting cutscene is a bit too slow in my opinion, but the game looks promising! I would really like to see a future and updated version!