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Whiff (A Work in Progress)'s itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Art | #335 | 2.778 | 2.778 |
| Creativity | #367 | 2.889 | 2.889 |
| Gameplay | #373 | 2.556 | 2.556 |
| Sound | #427 | 2.000 | 2.000 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Were the art assets made during the 48 hours?
Yes
Was all the music/sound created during the 48 hours?
No
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Man I did not expect it to get this real…great work!!
Cool concept, I have to admit, I prefered the golfing part.
Moreover, I liked the art direction of the dialogue part.
However, I would have liked an UI arrow to show the direction of where the ball will go, it would have helped me to be more precise.
Overall gg for your work!
Nice idea, and good writing, the dialogues are really convincing. And the characters are really well done! As for the golfing mechanic, a bit of UI to see where you are aiming would help a lot, and making the ball disappear when you hit the hole would make the player feel the success more. Also, I didnt have any sound in the game?
Hey, thank you for the input! Yeah, I wish I worked a little bit more on the UI/feedback aspect of the game. Sound is missing in this version, my bad!
The game bugged out for me on one of the choices and wouldn't continue after I'd clicked, but was really enjoying it up to that point. Like what you've done here!.
Thanks! For some weird reason(my own fault, whoops) the third and fourth choice sequence is soft crashing, coding is weird. Anyhow, glad you liked it!
Nice concept! Always enjoy a good golf game. Nice story too. Could use a little guide for the ball direction though.
Next version will include major UI improvements!
Really nice game! Only thing is that there's perhaps too much conversation between the two characters
Glad you liked it! It's a golf visual novel, so that's why there's so much dialogue
The character design and art is really nice! I enjoyed the mini golf aspect, it played nicely!
thanks for the feedback! glad you liked the game!