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Mix and Game Jam (2020)

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A jam submission

Whiff (A Work in Progress)View game page

Sneak around in a mini golf course, crack open a cold one and hang out with an old friend.

Submitted by nanana_na_nashi (@nanana_na_nashi), Jadhy, IAmPaullo — 1 hour, 57 minutes before the deadline

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Results

Criteria	Rank	Score*	Raw Score
Art	#335	2.778	2.778
Creativity	#367	2.889	2.889
Gameplay	#373	2.556	2.556
Sound	#427	2.000	2.000

Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Were the art assets made during the 48 hours?

Yes

Was all the music/sound created during the 48 hours?

No

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Comments

Jannik BoysenSubmitted3 years ago(+2)

Man I did not expect it to get this real…great work!!

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Drifting Hearts

EdalbungSubmitted3 years ago(+2)

Cool concept, I have to admit, I prefered the golfing part.

Moreover, I liked the art direction of the dialogue part.

However, I would have liked an UI arrow to show the direction of where the ball will go, it would have helped me to be more precise.

Overall gg for your work!

Submitted

Metal Car Solid

HelluysSubmitted3 years ago(+3)

Nice idea, and good writing, the dialogues are really convincing. And the characters are really well done! As for the golfing mechanic, a bit of UI to see where you are aiming would help a lot, and making the ball disappear when you hit the hole would make the player feel the success more. Also, I didnt have any sound in the game?

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IAmPaulloDeveloper3 years ago

Hey, thank you for the input! Yeah, I wish I worked a little bit more on the UI/feedback aspect of the game. Sound is missing in this version, my bad!

Kray8GamesSubmitted3 years ago(+3)

The game bugged out for me on one of the choices and wouldn't continue after I'd clicked, but was really enjoying it up to that point. Like what you've done here!.

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IAmPaulloDeveloper3 years ago

Thanks! For some weird reason(my own fault, whoops) the third and fourth choice sequence is soft crashing, coding is weird. Anyhow, glad you liked it!

PsychovinSubmitted3 years ago(+3)

Nice concept! Always enjoy a good golf game. Nice story too. Could use a little guide for the ball direction though.

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IAmPaulloDeveloper3 years ago

Next version will include major UI improvements!

SimoKapi3 years ago(+2)

Really nice game! Only thing is that there's perhaps too much conversation between the two characters

nanana_na_nashiDeveloper3 years ago(+1)

Glad you liked it! It's a golf visual novel, so that's why there's so much dialogue

HueyLeoneSubmitted3 years ago (2 edits) (+3)

The character design and art is really nice! I enjoyed the mini golf aspect, it played nicely!

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nanana_na_nashiDeveloper3 years ago

thanks for the feedback! glad you liked the game!