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A jam submission

MOWolfView game page

A my wolf novel about getting to Mowing.
Submitted by chukkonius — 1 hour, 42 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Creativity#113.7143.714
Story#152.9052.905
Presentation#162.3332.333

Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

HostSubmitted(+1)

I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.

Story (2):

There is certainly a story there. One that gave me a few laughs so if that was your intent then congratulations. I know it can be obvious in MY WOLF stories where the creator is mostly a bottom and awkwardly writing them in a topping scene, good to know that the inverse reigns true too.

Presentation (1):

Where are the transitions, Chukk? :catscream:

Creativity (2):

Finally, a story where the HOA was the villain all along!

Total (5):

Congratulations on miraculously not being the worst experience in Jam at least score-wise. I hope this brings great satisfaction to you.

I really wasn’t expecting you to actually upload something in the first place but I think the community is better now that you have.

Developer

I'm just happy at least one person didn't want to die after reading this mess.  Should I go back and try and fix it or just leave it? Then i could move on to something that isn't SUPPOSED to be terrible; if i get an idea again.

HostSubmitted

Do what your mower tells you to do.

Developer

Savage.

i had a headache

Developer

Me too.

Submitted(+2)

Chukk, I'm very proud of you for taking some time to create something and put it out there. I have tons of respect for anyone who takes the time and effort to put their money where their mouth is and actually make something. There's a lot of big talkers who'll never accomplish what you did because they're too busy talking while you were busy creating.

I could go on and on about specific critiques, but here's my number one piece of advice I want to impart. Practice. If you want to get better, just keep working in RenPy, keep writing, keep creating. The more you do it, the better you'll get at it. Promise.

Submitted(+1)

Purkka is right, this is incoherent at best if your not in on the joke, however,  I am absolutely part of the intended audience. While i typically am not a fan of art that is intentionally bad, esp when it is in reflex to the artists insecurities, It's clear that MOWolf was lovingly crafted to make a few people laugh. I'm so happy that chukk pushed through and finished this abomination that only a mother could love. (bonus points for the genuinely harrowing plotline of being coerced into sex via HOA

Developer(+1)

MORE SASS!

(+2)

Deranged, but not necessarily in a good way? Between all the weird quirks (like so many typos it seems intentional and the dialogue and narration UIs being used very weirdly), the prose is close to unreadable. The RPG elements, which seem to be the main point of the game, do not lead into some sort of punchline and are not visualized in a way that would funnily emphasize their realness in this world, if that's what is supposed to be happening. The vibe is stumbling across someone else's inside joke you don't get and have no way of enjoying.

Developer

Every statement you've made is absolutely true. I hope you catch all the quality submissions to the jam!

Submitted(+1)

Good hustle! I wanted more of the rpg elements but you already knew that. Needed to lead up into it more to make it pay off when it occurred.

Developer(+3)

MOWolf 2? Its more likely than you think

Submitted

Go on. Do so. #gun emoji.

(+1)

The Homeowners Association, truly the ultimate foe of our time

Developer

I really hate HOA's it's true.

(+2)

truly the most furry vn ever. the spelling errors enhance the experience  10/10

Submitted(+1)

Comedy gold. XD

Developer(+1)

Glad you had fun!

Submitted(+2)

This is a masterpiece, seriously! I'm dead XD

Developer(+1)

I hope you rise in 3 days.

Submitted(+2)

I tried to schedule this reply to send in 72 hours but itch.io won't let me so pretend I sent this in 72 hours.
I'M ALIVE!

Submitted (1 edit) (+2)

This is the most glorious madness I have seen brought to the screen in a long time. Thank you for bringing this into existence.

Developer

Thanks for all your encouragement!