I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!! I was into it and was distraught to see the "the end". I hope this continues later on 😩

Beautiful made me think about death and my life

Short, sweet and emotional. The twist at the end was unexpected but served the narrative quite well. Good work all around

Short but it delivers a tightly packed story. Loved the dynamics between the main couple, it really felt like they had a long relationship and they knew how to play off each other well. The way things developed whenever our dear lead had one of his bright inspirational moments was also quite fun and immersive. Good work

A tale that is familiar to many who have had shy friends dating, or been the shy friend. This one is short and sweet, while leaving you with a nice feeling at the end. 

A fun read with some dramatic moments that play off well.  The voices for the dialogues are a nice touch and the inferences to a heroic background got me interested in seeing what happened. Good work