Wow, you really did a number on my emotions. Harold. . . Harold's mom. So many tears! Mapping and events looked great. Story was very emotional, but I feel really sad that Harold's mom is not going to remember anything. Let them reunite, if only just for a moment!? It was like tragedy upon tragedy.

My thoughts while playing the game:

• Beautiful mapping
• Lovely music, too
• lol the battle music with Lucius is intense
• Such a sad story! Is this one where everyone dies?
• I like the maze set piece near the end. Keeps it feeling like a game, rather than a bunch of cutscenes. It was a little hard to figure out where the goal was, but I got it!
• Ah, not everyone dies. Yay!

Overall, this was a story that pulls at the heartstrings. The art is great, and the music is suitably emotional (and mostly not default). Story is coherent and free of major grammatical/spelling errors. Good job!

Really sharp maps and excellent writing. 

The fire map was beautiful, and the music throughout was well chosen.

This one has a lot of heart, a solid emotional impact, nice work!

The game is good, I like how you went with it, it would be good if was an actual game with actual characters.

Also nice mapping!