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A jam submission

Sleme LandView game page

My First game, Made for FFjam2017. Very simple Platformer
Submitted by lilymnky — 16 hours, 47 minutes before the deadline

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Sleme Land's itch.io page

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Music/Sounds#342.1112.111
Graphics/Design#382.1112.111
Mood/Atmosphere#382.2222.222
Overall#412.0002.000
Idea/Innovation#431.6671.667
Overall/Gameplay#441.8891.889

Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How long have this project been going?
for 2 months on and off. Total time 5-6 hours, first Game made using this program.

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Comments

I couldnt make it that far, but its cool that you made something! I included it in my Finally Finish Something Jam compilation video series, if you'd like to take a look. :)

HostSubmitted

Great entry for your first game and something to build on in the future. As others have said it feels a bit floaty but it's a good foundation to build on.

Developer

Thank you all for the Criticism, I also thank you for being honest, as it was hard to find someone honest. I considered makin my own controller, and now i realize that as a mistake to drop. Now i feel i can do better next time, and that's what matter to me! Thank you for taking you time to leave a comment in first place!

Submitted

I played and rated your game.

I'm afraid I have to repeat what others said before me.
The controls are way too floaty.

Are you using physics? I would recommend taking control over the physics of your player by writing your own player controller if you don't need physics interaction (like in dedicated physics games)

Good attempt and congratulations on finally finishing something.

Submitted

congrats on completing something. I did find this pretty impossible to play. I figured out that i could get extra height jumping off of a slime, but trying this on the second slime would never get me high enough to make the high ledge. I assuming physics were fighting this. And as Zelan said, the controls are very floaty, and makes it hard to play.

Not bad, Physics are really weird. Nice try for a first game, keep it up, I see potential :D

Submitted

The music doesn't loop, so after about a minute in the game, it goes silent.

I'll admit that I'm not the greatest at platformers, but I couldn't get past the jump after the second slime. There's so little space to land without dying there, and jumping on top of the slime didn't seem to help without a running start, but I couldn't manage that without dying.

It doesn't help that the character's jumps are very floaty. 'Floaty' isn't generally what you want with platformers. It just makes the game frustrating and difficult to control.

Submitted

This is what I see when I go to the game page:

No game to be seen?