Hi I was one of the streamers participating in the Feedback Quest. The VOD of me playing this on stream is up.

First, I'd like to say, this game gave me a heart attack. Its rare I feel this much intense tension from a game that made me jump at the sound of beeps. I hate you for making me jump in my seat and love you for it. The gameplay feels rough but fun. 

Some critiques I need to give are the sounds. The ringing is a bit loud or felt jarring. Especially the scanning. The ghosts could use more of a visual stimuli to it. I feel like something or anything would help boost it up. There's a bunch of things I feel could boost the scary feel of the game like soft ghost breathing sounds or anything to bump it up. 

Even as it is, its amazing but I feel like adding more stuff, more ghosts, locations. This game is like a cake, I only got once slice and I want the entire cake. This has so much potential and I hope to see more of it. It got me scared, I love it. Thank you and please keep up the hard work.  

Hello! I was one of the streamers who took part in Feedback Quest, and I'm here to leave some comments I had while playing.

Normally I start with positive comments and then go into negative. However, I want to switch it here because of an important thing I want to add.

Objects that are already scanned will continue to be picked up by the phone, to the point where it can create confusion with certain parts. I would recommend making it that you have to be in the same physical "room" as the object and have not stopped the ghost tied to it. I would also recommend that when at the circle of ghosts (which is where I first observed the above problem) the phone does something different to inform the player they don't need to scan something.

Now onto the good stuff. I LOVE the drawings in the beginning. They are hilarious and are a fun way to tell story. If you expand on this game, there needs to be more of those. Similarly, the villain at the end and the exchange with them is also funny. These comedic elements help make the game a lot more fun, even when it's trying to scare me.

I am also going to say that I think you and the developer of End the Slend should work together. While your game has a fun mechanic and comedy to it, their game did good with tension in the music and atmosphere. I think the two of you together could make a game that offers a great balance of comedy and tension.

Wow, I got scared! Hahaha.

It's a very impressive game. I liked the story at the beginning. I accidently pressed Next during the introduction and missed text, but couldn't find a previous button. Maybe that could be a good addition there. In relation to the gameplay, it's very pleasing to just move around and shoot. Maybe the fire rate could be slightly higher as well. I got curious about the ghosts! Are they configurations of thought forms or disembodied human spirits?

I'd like to leave some suggestions:

• Sound effects! I believe that a wolf howling, an owl noise, dogs barking, or "strange" noises could contribute a lot to the game atmosphere;
• Music! Everything was quiet, maybe too quiet! Some subtle music could increase the tension and enhance some moments;

Very good work! Keep it up!

Interesting concept. The first ghost was a jump in a chair! I just whish for a Run modifier... the sound also helps alot to keep the tension up!

This game is really unique, I think the movement is a little too slow and the FOV is very low and could be adjustable, but you got here a game that feels very different than the usual "uh oh spooky ghosts in a dark area!!1" kind of game. Good work!