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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Theme | #402 | 2.759 | 2.759 |
| Audio | #452 | 2.310 | 2.310 |
| Graphics | #465 | 2.552 | 2.552 |
| Innovation | #471 | 2.207 | 2.207 |
| Overall | #495 | 2.247 | 2.247 |
| Game Design | #551 | 2.034 | 2.034 |
| Fun | #658 | 1.621 | 1.621 |
Ranked from 29 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
There Is Uknown Person that want to go in your room..
He is Behind The Door...
Did you write all the code and made all the assets from scratch?
yes
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Good game!!! The sprite art is great, and the audio design is good, can be better but wouldn't ask more from a one-week game jam.... Like the other ones maybe some way to lose and a meter to just terrify the player would have been awesome..
Just wanted to know is there a way to possibly loose? Cause I would like to see the HE who is behind the door ;P
Kudos and great work on the game.
Good idea for the theme. The gameplay is simple but confusing at first because the screen is just black, would be nice to have art when you are inside the closet. Great job submiting :D
thanks
a bit confused when I play, I think if you add some tutorial, and guide stuff, It will be helpful.
The player plays your game and feels fun, but before that, they need to understand and know what to do
thanks for the feedback!
Great job, you’ve really made a lot here!
thanks!
Before I start the proper review I want to tell you about how I review things. I don't like to sugarcoat things and tend to be unbiased because I believe honest review and feedback is the most important thing that artist can receive. I can be harsh but remember that's for your good and I will give you some advice. ok? Let's begin!
Well, your game is very short and boring. There's that one clicker moment which I think is out of place and can be changed without anyone noticing. Audio is a bit too loud for my liking but that's my problem and to be honest you better handle audio than me.
So we know about your 2 main problems and down below I will describe how I would fix them:
Graphics. I won't talk about shadows and perspective, it's too hard and I believe you will master this two things with experience. But I will talk about details. Were I you, I would add more lines, more furniture and more colours. It's hard to spot where walls start and where is floor so a line here and there will make a big difference. You little prince is a prince after all and he needs to show his splendor so adding more furniture will be great idea and will help with emptiness. And lastly colours, remember the devil is in the details. While adding more stuff to fill the room I would use more colours to make the room more engaging.
Now let's check the clicker part. While writing last part I left the game running and nothing happened, monster went sleeping and didn't bother to find me. I would add small little detail, a meter (slider or just a number) showing howuch time's left until game over. Trying to make a part of yoyr game tende try to figure out what causes player to feel uncomfortable or nervous. This trick always works.
Here's my review. I hope you will read it, take a notebook and write down each problem I have written. But I must give credit where credit's due. For a 12 year old now proper gsme developer you did pretty good job. I have started my journey 2 years ago just before I started going to university and comparing me two years ago and you now there's nothing to compare. You beat past me in every way possible and I wish you will keep this hobbyand practice as much as possible. We love games and that's why we make ours. Congratulations and good luck on your new path!
Thank you so much for the comment you are right! I planed to add a timer to the game to have some way to lose and more decorations but I was not much productive and I end up doing the most things at the last days.
I am glad you liked the review!
I hope your next game will be 10 times better, I can't wait to see it!
I really liked the sprites and sounds :)
thanks!
Real great pixel art going on there, I just love it ! Very unique too.
please rate my game : https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-11/rate/2535873
thanks for the comment! i will play and rate your game!
Really cool idea and awesome sprites!
Hey! At your age I was not doing anything like this. Well done.
thanks for the positive review
thanks guys for the postive comments! ;)
cool game but there is nothing mutch to do
hope the best for u and ur game
Cool concept but im not sure what am i supposed to do
The imagination you came up with is really great, however there is nothing much to play in the game. Anyways, it mind blowing for someone aged 12. I am in final year college and started gamedev only after entering the college. Gamedev is a cool thing to explore man and be proud on yourself and what you made. Cheers : )
The game looks nice sadly theres not much to do
The concept is good. Goes well with the theme. Lots of room for future improvement.
thanks!
I liked the concept tho i didnt really get what i was supposed to do
Um... what should i do? I press Tab and the dialogue keep repeating
yes
The pixel art looks nice, but the sound effects could be a little quieter. Could be further developed in the future, nice idea, but from a game design point of view I don't think the players enjoy clicking their mouse button 160 times.
Thanks for the feedback!
I saw that you are 12 years old you re talented, this is a great game, good luck
thanks a lot your game is very nice!
nice game.. btw i am also 12. can you give me feedback on my game also?
The Game is simple wich i like keep the work(i also write comment under the game and raet it)