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Feedback on Sprite Art

A topic by Sartre_Sade created Feb 26, 2023 Views: 411 Replies: 7
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Hello, I have started to dabble in pixel art, and I just wanted some feed back on sprites I have made as test-runs and experiments. I one day want to work on a game project, and I would like to know what people think of the art I have been practicing with. I hope I am allowed to ask this question here, it is my first time using itch.io for feedback. 


 

If you can please give me some feedback on my images here, such as whether I can improve shapes, shading, (especially on the sprite,) please let me know what you think, and thank you for your time. 

Sorry, I dont have any helpful feedback on how to improve anything but I just wanted to say it looks great! The colors and overall shape work really well because you can still tell what it's supposed to be even when you shrink the sprite down really small

Thank you so much for your reply! I appreciate comment regardless, and I'm happy that you can see the details that are supposed to be there. 

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Hello, I love both sprites but the portrait looks a bit too sharp. The skin and outfit look smooth but the hair and eyes are spiky and rough, which seems a little strange to me. But I'm probably splitting hairs.

This isn't bad, but I started playing Zelda: The Minish Cap recently and I really like their character sprites. Not sure if that's a style you'd go for.

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The linework on the portrait looks sloppy, like downscaled high-res art instead of true pixel art.  You've got uneven curves, you've got broken lines, and you've got stray pixels.  The design is fine, but some clean-up would really help.

The sprite looks fine, although some more shading would help it pop more.

I really like the shape/way the characters feet come together on the pixel sprite! I really love his shoes/feet for some reason. They give him a dark badass cool/ yet kind of dainty/gentle and cute vibe which is definitively my kind of anime guy trope hehe~

I am not sure but it seems to me that he/she looks down. Maybe it was planned but I am not sure ¯\_(ツ)_/¯