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oohh, imagery and layout definitely makes me feel like I'm reading an old journal or something. great vibe. As much story telling as it is a game. 

Vibes hit immediately, such a great design. Board game feel only adds to the layers of mystery. Great submission.

VIBES! including a "inspired by" always makes me happy. This layout is A freaking plus, and is clearly a labor of love. Extremely well done.

Such a fun idea to play with. it gives deep mechanics, without going overboard and making things too complicated. There is some wording that could be cleaned up to help the wall of text, but still a great submission! 

World building mechanics!! Such a great idea. Such a simple premise, but done so very well and made so uniquely. 

Incredibly simple mechanics, easy to understand. All with a beautiful twist. almost "pick up and play" style ttrpg, which is so fun to see! Great game.

Fantastic idea! I always love to see a theme with a twist. The mechanics are simple enough, but could maybe be a little confusing for folks newer to ttrpgs. I love that the setting is clearly described, examples are given, and everything is given context.

Absolutely full of horror flavor and vibe! Very well done examples, and flavor text. You get such a clear image of where this game is trying to take you on your adventure. The text is just a little hard to read in some areas and there are also a few walls of text that can be difficult to read for some people. great submission! 

A great take on a narrative style game. Easy enough for anyone to pick up and tell an incredible story either with a GM at the helm, or even solo. It could have some examples of story telling prompts for folks that might not be as adept in "yes, and..." storytelling, but that's really it. Great game, great vibe.

Layout is incredible, holds the theme from start to finish, and clearly covers everything from world building to mechanics. Beautiful game.

very cool imagery and layout! The basic rules are explained very well, and it def covers safety and comfort for the table. There could be a little more description of the world/setting the rules are meant to accompany, maybe with some story telling suggestion for the Archivist? Great job!

i love a good lost memory game! it's full of flavor and helps you paint the scene for your party very well.

this game is so full of beautiful monster madness. I love the freedom to just be a giant, city destroying monster that has their own problems to deal with.

Survival RPG in a tabletop format. love it! This looks like so much fun. just a thought while im reading, what if there was a way to hide resources you find if your loyalty was low? just like, if everyone's marking off health from missing water, you could mark off your hidden water stash instead.

Very well designed, very clear rules, and i love the Rock, Paper, Scissors mechanic. very cool game!

A beautiful idea! this would be great for so many people just see things from a different perspective. 

A true test of improv and imagination. this game should have people absolutely cracking up by the end of it. 
The layout could use a little organizing, as it's a little bit confusing what should be rolled in each step. But still, very original and creative idea!

The idea of the party being a wandering caravan is so fun! 
You could maybe talk a little more about the phases and what they mean. Also, something that would be fun would be to give the players a moment to discuss and describe where they are after each phase. Like, did they stop at a river to rest, or in some ruins...etc.

such a unique idea! very simple mechanics, adorable design, and can be played with or without a GM. 

such a great attention to details and walking people through the rules with care. 10/10

this is so inspiring, i can just see folks telling incredible stories within this game.

Very well done, especially discussing safety tools and keeping yourself safe. Journaling games are so much fun. Also, the inclusion of alternate rules is very helpful. 

first of all....adorable. include art in your character building is so fun! The Challenge track is a little bit confusing at first, but it's not bad. Some examples for the GM to run the game would be cool, too!

The deck of cards is fun and creative mechanic to include! Love the details about how it is more narrative focused and what that means in the context of the rules.

The option to play solo, as a group or with a GM is fantastic. The layout is so user friendly, ESPECIALLY the inluded FORMFILLABLE sheet. 

Small thing, but is there any special things that happen if you roll 0 or less?

The name is so creative, i love it. Something good to include would be a small section for the GM about how to run the game, or suggestions for things like types of artifacts, mission set up...

very cool structure! it would be cool to see examples of questions for the Barkeep to ask, and some more suggestions for the characters stories!