I would recommend a bit of reformatting and editing to account for phrasing and explanations. However, this is definitely set as a fast paced game where I personally feel like it would really revel and hit home in a longer time from. It would absolutely be a fantastic method to use, funny enough, for arc planning! Especially when in particular settings. All in all, once picking up on the intended play methods, I think I'd enjoy playing something like this!

I had some trouble parsing some of the formatting, but this core idea is really fun. I think some aspects need re-arranged to be easier to pick up flow of how the game works and what certain terms mean. Still, really unique concept!

A true test of improv and imagination. this game should have people absolutely cracking up by the end of it. 
The layout could use a little organizing, as it's a little bit confusing what should be rolled in each step. But still, very original and creative idea!