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¿Hay algun lugar donde se recomiende tomar imagenes de luchadores para la aventura? 

The narration was fluid and concrete, I love it, I really liked the twist at the church, it was logical and gut wrenching

It is a reflection, I didn't think of the theme that way

I love the feel of the story, the thoughts of a champion, and a líder in the moments of battle

I love the concept but in the change of play when the darkness dispelled I lost track of the action, and it felt like there was two different stories

It reads well, I loved the story, the ending made me look at the horizon and wonder about those stuck brothers

I love it, it feels like an old fairytale, the desciption of the beigns of the house seems a little lacking, but it may be that I read it a little too rapid because the story scare me a little

Thank you, it means a lot for me to hear that, I tried to use my favorite faction with the prose that suit the faction, but with another point of view to reflect the theme of the jam

I won't try to put all the flaws of the story into the constrains of the jam, because thats the way the jam work, but, I write this in under 2 hours because I totaly forgot about the jam

The ratmen needs more love, I enjoy the story very much

Awesome story, I love the cliffhanger, the interaction, the magic, the names

it has a good unsettling vibe, it lacks description of the panicked soldier, but overall a good infected story

I love the oracle feel of the narator

I love letter feel of the log, I'd love for a log that said, "Escape shuttle launched"

The twist is good, I love a good mistery, but I want to know more

I love the way its told, in like snipets, in survivor stories like this this pacing is great, but the one thing I don't quite grasp is, What are jackals?

Well, I'm not English native, so my grammar and pacing is a bit off, also, I can't write too often, you know third world country schedule, but I try to write at every opportunity I have

So, if you have notes or advice about pacing, I'd love to hear them, I need to improve

Its so good, I love the repetition of it, the lost of every part its so good at a psychological horror

It looks and reads better, it sparked  my imagination, I'm going to try and do an alternate version, like a Delta version, if thats ok with you

I love the premise, easy to understand and play, but, the page needs more polishing, its a little confusing with the arrows

One last thing, are you going to expand this with dishes or recepies? and, its okay if I try to do it?

I´m getting into coding and gamedev, I'll be using your work on my attempt to roguelike, thank you, I'll credit you wherever I can

I love it, I love the way you describe how he focus in the fight, a harrowing moment just summarized in a dull pain, the touching moment in the mural ending with the mags was brilliant, he was jerked back to the reality in that instant, it was excellent

I loved the ending, it was brilliant

I didn't find the infinite part in the story, neverless, it was a good story, I loved the twins and the ceremony