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OPR Writing Jam #3

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A jam submission

The Jester CircusView project page

OPR WJam 3 One step into the jesters circus
Submitted by sipio6 — 1 day, 15 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Originality#113.7223.722
Adherence to the Theme#143.7783.778
Overall#163.3893.389
Enjoyment#182.6672.667

Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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DragonMarineSubmitted2 years ago

Love how you used the theme for a recruitment story!

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Protect the Child at all Costs.
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Hobby FuzionSubmitted2 years ago

There was a little pacing notes that felt like this was translated? Felt a bit like the late 80’s Harlequin lore vibe which is tough to capture so well done.

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OPR Writing Jam#3-Threshold of Doom
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sipio6Developer2 years ago

Well, I'm not English native, so my grammar and pacing is a bit off, also, I can't write too often, you know third world country schedule, but I try to write at every opportunity I have

So, if you have notes or advice about pacing, I'd love to hear them, I need to improve

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Hobby FuzionSubmitted2 years ago

No slight intended, writing in another language is fantastically challenging and I applaud you for doing so, as I said it reminded me of earlier Games Workshop lore.

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ShaperMakuSubmitted2 years ago

I for one, would have run.

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Victory For Hydra
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YanlucasSubmitted2 years ago

nice recruitment tatic
too bad only two elfs of a entire colony can take a joke

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A Bound of Honor
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small_grey_owlSubmitted2 years ago

You did well evoking the strange imagery and style of the jester elves, and you managed to make them come across as sinister, something which the legacy material insists is the case and yet rarely aims for itself. A good twist on the traditional understanding of this faction.

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The Book of Nepenthe
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HellrikeSubmitted2 years ago

The Jesters managed to feel like a Gang of Jokers, which I think fits them incredibly well. They're strange, esoteric, and occult, all of the best aspects of the aesthetic. Very good job.

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Last Man
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