Talk about batman levels of prepared.
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Yeah I'm still a bit of an amateur. So I'll have to look into a proofreader for my stuff (maybe I should pay for a Grammarly subscription). I honestly could not figure out how to separate the third person viewpoint from the captain's first person viewpoint. Sorry about the confusing moments. It's hard to make a complex story in under 1,000 words, but I am planning on extending the story to the events leading up to the monologue, just like what I plan to do with my first story.
Yeah this is kind of a sequel to my first story for OPR "Protect the Child at all Costs". So this is the same Elizabeth from that story all grown up (well, she's 18 at this time, a Battle Sister Novice). Glad you liked it!
Interesting character. The reflection theme works rather well with the protagonist comparing herself to the poor little girl whose birthday she ruined.
Granted I have a very large bias against rats and mice in general so I care not for the plight of rat men.
Quite a literal take on the Reflection theme. But I still loved it, quite an interesting portrayal of lust and how it grasps the mind like a muse.
The prose flowed like wine so to speak, with really only one hiccup in the third paragraph of the second column.
Yes the Jotun was the Daemon Prince leading the hordes. The "Stony Bowling Balls" were the Trolls from Frozen, basically they were the ones who summoned the daemons to begin with, and they ended up being exterminated by the Feudal guard and the daemons, with the daemons possessing any dead and turning them into Draugurs (think Tzanngors but they're humans with ice spikes growing out of them in various places).