Pretty good how it made the reader guess who Marlan was letting in. Almost expected a late save from the Battle Brothers, but that ending worked a lot better.
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OPR Writing Jam#3-Threshold of Doom's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Adherence to the Theme | #4 | 4.211 | 4.211 |
Enjoyment | #11 | 3.526 | 3.526 |
Overall | #12 | 3.789 | 3.789 |
Originality | #13 | 3.632 | 3.632 |
Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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