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Man, I was kinda afraid to go into this at first (furry is not my thing) but some other va writers I really liked linked over to your article, wich was interesting, then I read about your project and the premise got me curious enough to take a look. I'm glad I did. The writing is so strong and so different from most VAs, it has this limnal, eeiry feeling that draws you in from the start. The furry thing is there, but its not a used substitute for strong characterization, and even in Lukes scene, its as much about characterization as the act, and the characterization was strong enough to overpower any squick (Luke is such a slut and just I want to play more so I can find someone to love him, or at least give him some snuggles) Kano wasn't as interesting, but I am hyped for the Kobolds! Or at least I'm assuming thats what they are, but their designs look like they've come straight out of the Monster Manual so I don't think you could blame me. I'm playing a Kobold in my group right now so I'm interested in how you'll interpret them, and make them fit with this more eloquent, poetic writing style. I'm super keen to see how the management aspects play out, and to play matchmaker with the guests. Overall I was blown away by this and happy to be so.

I think its about respecting him and earning his trust more than being nice. You need to find a balance between helping him when he needs it and respecting him when he tells you he doesn't, even if he looks like he does. Let him walk on his own, and don't push it with the bath.

Hey, just letting you know that, when trying to get the bad ending on Kols route, when I select the "yes... but" option I get this error message:


[code]
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script_chapter8_kol.rpy", line 450, in <module>
NameError: name 'false' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "script_chapter8_kol.rpyc", line 449, in script
  File "/Users/----/Downloads/HumanCargo 2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/ast.py", line 1626, in execute
    choice = renpy.exports.menu(choices, self.set, args, kwargs, item_arguments)
  File "/Users/-----/Downloads/HumanCargo 2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/exports.py", line 949, in menu
    condition = renpy.python.py_eval(condition)
  File "/Users/-----/Downloads/HumanCargo 2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/python.py", line 2035, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "/Users/----/Downloads/HumanCargo 2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/python.py", line 2028, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/script_chapter8_kol.rpy", line 450, in <module>
NameError: name 'false' is not defined

Darwin-18.5.0-x86_64-i386-64bit
Ren'Py 7.3.2.320
Human Cargo 0.90
Mon Oct 21 20:33:56 2019
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I was super excited to see that this has updated! Last I checked on it I think it was only version 60. I spent all evening going through the new routes and enjoying the new added CGs, they're all really well done and I thoroughly enjoyed all the new dialogue expansions. I really felt like the options you pick with Yoshi impacted his personality, but not so much that it completely changed him as a person, which is a fine line to walk, and it made the repeat playthrough's really enjoyable.

If I have any one thing to critique its Nasir route. I get what he's going for and that its probably not aimed at me, but, I just got the feeling he was kind of plowing over Yoshi and really pushing himself hard onto him was pretty squicky for me. It just came across as less sexy and more sexual harassment. I did warm up to him toward the end though as he was actively trying to reign himself in and respect Yoshi more, or at least he did with the options I picked. I just think having a scene where boundaries, and better yet, a safe word can be discussed earlier in the route would really make his route better. There's nothing sexier than informed consent.


That sounds bad when I type it all out, but I really just want to thank you for making this available for free. I really enjoyed the world and the characters, and I just want to see it improve. I'm super excited for Docs route, he's probably the one thats the most "me" out of all these guys and I've enjoyed thoroughly enjoyed all the others so far, especially Razixs and Zed (Noone gets poor Razixs sense of humour. I like his flirty jokes) and am eagerly anticipating more.