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An interactive children's book, rated Hard PG
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Coin-Cruncher needs to be redone, but it will be easy to do. The dealbreaker is the hook is too long. It should be something like "Pac-Man meets roguelike!". Under 7 words, short and snappy that grabs someone's attention. The 10-second pitch and Elevator pitch should be half as long, but those are not deal-breakers. Please republish.